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Precious Moments

July 16, 2009
By Teenqueen BRONZE, Pune, Other
Teenqueen BRONZE, Pune, Other
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I want to go back to my past,
and make those moments last,
when we were still friends.

I want to relive those days,
cause i miss your cute ways,
i want this misunderstanding to end.

As hard as i try,
i can do nothing,but cry
since it causes great pain.

To know that what we shared,
And the feeling-that you cared,
will never be the same again...

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on Aug. 13 2009 at 7:57 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

great job :) i can relate to this easily and you did well writing down emotions and thoughts in your head and turning it into a great poem :) bravo! 4 stars :) if you get a chance, check out some of my work, i would love the feedback. keep writing :)