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Summer Breeze

July 12, 2009
By PinkPrincess GOLD, Wellington, Florida
PinkPrincess GOLD, Wellington, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
I think therefore I am

The wind is blowing my hair
As I'm trying not to stare
At the sunlight so far away
You've never seen such a prettier day

The sun is shining so bright
The clouds are so large and white
Drifting slowly away
Leaving my worries at bay

As the rain clouds start to draw near
I feel my head start to clear
My patients has recovered some
But my body still feels numb

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on Aug. 25 2009 at 1:39 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i love this!! i love how you solved all your worries through the environment. you wrote it all down so peacefully and perfectly ;) the second stanza is my favorite, but the poem is all around great! love it! :) check out some of my work and rate/comment, the feedback is so important to me. im giving this piece 5 stars :)