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He Didn't Pull The Trigger

June 28, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

He didn't pull the trigger,
be he is the reason she is dead.
Because of the pain he caused her,
she put a bullet through her head.
Because of the gun's noise no one heard he scream.
She had already made her choice,
but no one knew of her tormented dreams.
The dreams she dreamed of him,
and the love that they once shared.
She took her life because he refused to care.
She loved him with all she could,
and he left her all alone.
Her heart was still with him,
the night that trigger was pulled.
And before she took her life,
she whispered " I will always love you",
as the rain fell dark and cold.
But her last words went unheard,
As the gun roared and the thunder rolled.

The author's comments:
I haven't the slightest clue what inspired me to write this...however it has become one of my favorite peices written by myself.

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This article has 3 comments.

sadie912 said...
on Sep. 4 2009 at 9:08 pm
:O wow.......

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 15 2009 at 10:40 pm
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT....It is a really great poem. It is written from a heart that has been ripped open, and jeered at. I can relate....LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT

on Jul. 7 2009 at 2:16 pm
FashionGuru DIAMOND, Manhattan, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion, I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

It explains a very desperate attempt to get back the love that you've lost. Very good, written from someone who knows what it is like to feel pain and sadness. I hope you keep writing.

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