Outsider Looking In

June 28, 2009
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Standing in the bathroom
Looking at myself in the mirror
Tears ready to bloom
Getting nearer and nearer

I ask my reflection if you’ll ever betray me
Everyone else has before
In your eyes I see no guarantee
Acting vain I stare at myself some more

To see if I can trust you I move to the right
You don’t move with
I jump back with fright
Believing you would always be there for me was a myth

I stare enviously at you brushing your hair
I was trapped
Every second watching you my heart fills with even more despair
I’d never be able to adapt

It’s here trapped inside the mirror in which I stay
My head starts to spin
I wish to be you everyday
Because I’ll always be just the outsider looking in

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Amanda13 said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 12:51 pm
amazing! 5 stars! completely adore it
writer24/7/365 said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 8:33 pm
wow this is amazing. please read & comment on my stuff.
beauty76k said...
Aug. 1, 2009 at 11:40 pm
whoa.. awesome.. i could feel you and I could picture it all kinda creeped me out when she didnt do what you did lol look at mine i give u 5 stars
PinkPrincess said...
Jul. 20, 2009 at 10:34 pm
wow that poem was amazing it pulled me into the mirror with you! nice job!
xDarithz said...
Jul. 20, 2009 at 8:06 pm
This is really good. I can relate to this. Good job! =)
princess_of_the_king said...
Jul. 15, 2009 at 10:52 pm
Excellent! I love it all! Keep up the great work!!
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