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Little Love

June 26, 2009
By TheColorSilver PLATINUM, Commack, New York
TheColorSilver PLATINUM, Commack, New York
27 articles 22 photos 33 comments

Didn’t believe you were really gone,
Couldn’t understand the tune to this song.
Didn’t wanna play the sad harmony,
Just wanted to see you free.

Never again could you hold my hand,
Dance across the open land,
Hold you in my arms so tight,
Protecting you from terrors of the night.

My little child,
So frail so small,
To hold you again,
Would fix it all.

My love for you
Is an everlasting one
Please come back,
Your mamma’s home.

I wanna see you grow real tall,
Live your life how you want to.
Get into a fight over something small,
The come to me to cure it all.

Please come home,
My little love,
You’ve got a life,
You should’ve lived.

Here or not,
My love runs hot,
You will always live on,
In the memories I hold.

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This article has 12 comments.

laRaMeii said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 7:16 pm
laRaMeii, Commack, New York
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wow. that was simply beautiful. sad. and emotional. KEEP WRITING!! love your stuff

on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:50 pm
TheColorSilver PLATINUM, Commack, New York
27 articles 22 photos 33 comments
thanks guys :)

EdytD SILVER said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 3:43 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 258 comments
This is a very emotional piece, and well-written. Nice job!

tor10jax GOLD said...
on Sep. 1 2009 at 7:14 pm
tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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Awww :'(. That was amazing. I'm so sorry.

Keep writing!

amyxu said...
on Aug. 12 2009 at 4:09 pm
This is a well-crafted piece and it's really touching. Good job!

on Jul. 20 2009 at 8:53 pm
TheColorSilver PLATINUM, Commack, New York
27 articles 22 photos 33 comments
BTW: I wrote this, not as a teenage mother who lost a child, but as a way to acknowledge all the children who die before they ever live- like my sister, Ribbon. I love you.

Heyhey said...
on Jul. 15 2009 at 2:26 pm
What a sad poem...

Darothy1133 said...
on Jul. 9 2009 at 1:46 am
Wow, that was amazing. You are an excellent writer.

Lindsey_O GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2009 at 6:31 pm
Lindsey_O GOLD, Marshfield, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
Words slide off the lead,
creating permanent marks;
writer's secret code.
~Lindsey O'Connell

wow that was amazing! it was so touching! i absolutely loved it! you have a real gift!

LaurryWebs said...
on Jul. 8 2009 at 1:32 pm
So touching, sad, deep, and full of true emotion.

JULY4 said...
on Jul. 7 2009 at 12:57 am
This is extremely touching and well written.

JollyILU said...
on Jul. 6 2009 at 2:07 am
That was the saddest thing I EVER read. So touching.