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Bottled Up

November 6, 2023
By Anonymous

The burning rage you feel within

This feeling is extremely powerful

You push this feeling away and bottle it up

Then it all comes out at once

Like a bursting flame

Anger


The tears that fall from your face

This feeling hurts you the most

You push this feeling away and bottle it up

Then it all comes out at once

Like a pouring rain

Sadness


The confusion that twists your mind

This feeling messes with your head

You push this feeling away and bottle it up

Then it all comes out at once

Like a man who is insane

Frustration


The resentment that you feel towards others

This feeling feels wrong

You push this feeling away and bottle it up

Then it all comes out at once

Like your worst pain

Hate


The author's comments:

This inspiration behind this poem was hurting my ankle. I hurt it during a football game back on October 13th. I have tried my best to stay positive about it. I push away these emotions; anger, sadness, frustration, and hate because they are bad. But it is human to have these emotions. And last week I hit my breaking point. After surgery I didn’t feel good and some very minor thing just pushed me over the edge and I just had to let it out. The emotions were all bottled up. In this poem I used a lot of repetition. Each stanza was 6 lines. The first lines all start with “The”. The second lines all start with “This feeling”. The third lines were all “You push this feeling away and bottle it up”. The fourth lines were all “Then it all comes out at once”. The fifth lines all started with “Like” and all rhymed at the end. Finally the sixth lines were all just the emotion itself. This poem was very easy to write because it’s what I am truly feeling. I enjoyed writing this piece because it allowed me to express myself and sort of ‘let out’ these emotions.


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