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Blacked Out

October 24, 2023
By imafikuyomi27 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
imafikuyomi27 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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a tunnel dipped down,

suddenly

had not a moment to think

before she found herself

down very deep

very deep

slowly time went down about her

and wonder going next.

 She tried to look and make out but too dark.


The author's comments:

This poem is actually an erasure poem and it was based on a text given by blackoutpoetry.glitch.me/. 

 

This piece was an experiment with erasure poems and I love them now. 


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