Listen...Watch...Dance | Teen Ink


June 21, 2009
By OurFrost GOLD, Galt, California
OurFrost GOLD, Galt, California
10 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Listen to the roaring thunder.
Watch the sky as it flashes with anger!
Feel the rain as it falls-
Jumping from the sky to
Caress the ground below.

Hear it speaking to the rocks
as it descends, crashing swiftly-yet gently- onto them.

Liberate your stiffness-
Launch yourself into its flow-
Dance in between the drops as they fall.
Slide this way and that,
Skip nimbly over and around the puddles.

Visit the child tonight,
Think not about that which ties you down-
Jump, soaring into the sky-
Swim through the rain!

Touch each drop!

Glide faster, leaving gravity behind!

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on Jan. 3 2010 at 3:31 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
I feel light as a feather when I read this.

and thanks for commenting on my work too!