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Suspense

June 15, 2009
By Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

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Holding my breath,
Leaning on my toes,
Teeth cutting into my lip,
Fingers crossed,
Hint of hope in my eyes,
My tentative smile,
Tense, motionless,
With that hopeful anticipation,
Unsure and uncalled for,
Suspense.

© Kathryn K., Pompton Plains, NJ

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It's such a daily part of life. Hope you like it!
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windswift DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 6:01 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
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let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

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i realy liked this one, it has little emotion, but in this type of poem no emotion is required to make it great, you described suspence to the letter, thats hard to do, five for this one

 

AndThisIsReal PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 15 2009 at 9:17 am
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
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Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

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S.U.S.P.E.N.S.E. indeed.

:)