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the visit

March 8, 2023
By Anonymous

THE VISIT

 

After a long flight stepping off the plane into a different air than you're used to . your family rushes for huggs . The tall buildings and bricky pavement are unique . The door is cold and small. The house has a warm fireplace. The bedroom is shared but cozy . The home has a familiar scent . a little cat prances across the wooden floor. ‘’ What's up lil man’’ he says of the whale walking over to pet him. It's late so he decided to go to bed. “I'm going to turn in for the night” he says with a yawn. His cousin responds with” if you hear knocking at your window don't look back”. “ umm ok ?’’ he says. That was strange, he thought . his bed was so warm and calm. Lil man jumped softly onto his bed. “Hey boy” he said softly. As he started to drift into the land of dreams , he heard  a soft knock at the window. W-what he thought . ‘’knock , knock ,knock”. Ill just look ba- crash there was a oily tentacle thrusted into lil man . his blood and insides all over the floor . tears began streaming down his face.anger made his whole body violent his mind focused on killing that entity. He spun around and saw thomas the tank engines face covered in a oil like liquid.another tentacle flew at him. His nature took over . he moved out of the way and grabbed a old root beer bottle. The tentacle retracted . another one crashed into the side of the house. Avoiding brick was difficult. By now the whole neighborhood was awake . he jumped to the things face . with fast succession he stabbed it multiple times . the things oily tentacle engulfed him. He was slammed on the ground . a old man threw him a shotgun. He was on his back shooting that gun . the entity squealed and created oily spears . 2 impaled him. The monster vanished. He was coughing up an unhealthy amount of blood. He woke up with lil man . he looked out the window at streets of gold. 


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scary


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