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You Will Not Keep Me Treading In Black Night

January 9, 2023
By aliceswonderland BRONZE, White Plains, New York
aliceswonderland BRONZE, White Plains, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes”.
- Jim Carrey


I will not let you take my inner light.

Others shall succumb, but I will resist

You will not keep me treading in black night.

 

People fall every day, and though I might

By the Devil and Angel, I’ve been kissed

I will not let you take my inner light.

 

Starting off summer by flying a kite

Shot the arrow in the game of life, and missed 

You will not keep me treading in black night.

 

Finally, I fall into the fire bright

Flames take my body, and engulf my wrist

I will not let you take my inner light.

 

A rope lowered in the pit, I hold tight

I pull myself through the cool, cloud of mist.

You will not keep me treading in black night.

 

Though Ixtab may have taken a small bite

Those not victimized yet, I have a list

I will not let you take my inner light

You will not keep me treading in black night.


The author's comments:

This villanelle is about my personal struggles with mental health and depression. Overcoming it is a huge challenge, and there are millions of people in the world with the same struggles as me. I hope that this poem can connect to someone and inspire them, too, to help people who are struggling.


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