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Misty Mornings

December 16, 2022
By Lazypotato222 BRONZE, Arvada, Colorado
Lazypotato222 BRONZE, Arvada, Colorado
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 Misty Mornings


Gently falling oil

Grace the Earth below, 

Sink into rich dark soil,

Help green things grow.


Your touch, soft and silken

Smoothly slipping down sleek skin, 

A warm and wet embrace, 

Sweeter than hugging my own kin.


Creating a crescendo, tapping on tin roofs,

A lullaby of celebration,

I hear your sweet, gentle sound,

I can’t help but leap in elation. 


Your scent arrives before,

Earthy aroma tainted air,

A promise for a storm 

More exciting than a carnival fair.


Although the epitome of gracious generosity, 

There is a cruelness about your ways:

Sandy Sahara soil never sees the end to your wickedness, 

While the Amazon sees nothing but your altruistic praise.


Your presence is rarely constant,

Fleeting like darkness with the coming dawn, 

But every time you make yourself known

Like a moth to a flame, I am drawn.


From now until the day I die,

My love for you will never fade, 

I’ll still enjoy splashing in puddles,

And watching dew form on every grass blade. 


I’ll marvel at your beauty, 

While tasting your very essence 

And will get excited to see you 

Even into my late adolescence. 


Even when I’m old and gray,

I will dance beneath you, 

Watching a rainbow form above, 

Reveling at the view.


The author's comments:

I'm a junior in high school with no prior experience with poetry, but we tried it out in my Creative Writing class and I really liked how this personification piece about rain turned out and now I'd like to get it published!


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