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Ode to Shabbat

November 30, 2022
By alexislira BRONZE, San Pedro, California
alexislira BRONZE, San Pedro, California
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Oh Holy day of Shabbat,
Full of prayer and remembrance 

I embrace the one that created the world with determination 


At the table together,

We cross hands to give gratitude 

Bread and fish, 

To soup and meat 

We all set aside what were doing to eat


You fill the rooms with calmness and relieve 

The torah is recited,

Because it is what we believe 


As the sun goes down, 

And I crawl into bed

My body is full of joy and food 

For the next six days, I will be waiting for you 


The author's comments:

I am a senior at Port of Los Angeles High School. This piece was given to me as an assignment in my creative writing class. It was interesting to complete because I had no previous understanding of Shabbat. It was a challenging piece, but I am very proud of it!


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Afra ELITE said...
on Dec. 9 2022 at 8:32 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

I didn't know what Shabbat was until I read this...
Great job writing this!!!