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August 20, 2022
By isabellacxl BRONZE, 上海, Other
isabellacxl BRONZE, 上海, Other
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The first time I saw you, 

you had the stomach flu. 

  

You only wore one shoe, 

Your bonnet was askew. 

  

Your smile lit up the sky, 

Nothing could make you cry. 

  

Everything about you was new, 

I loved every part of you. 



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Afra ELITE said...
on Aug. 29 2022 at 11:13 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Love how it rhymes...

on Aug. 22 2022 at 9:44 am
LiteraryMe PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
“The earth has music for those who listen.” —William Shakespeare

I love the simplicity of this--great rhyming pattern as well!