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Rain Storm

May 30, 2009
By Chrissy_L GOLD, Ramsey, New Jersey
Chrissy_L GOLD, Ramsey, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind.

Sidestep raindrops as they fall upon the pallid sand,
Swirling drafts dance the grains whom the winds command,
Roaring breezes weave through sandstorms upon which lost souls cry,
Within the waters, crazed spirits rule all the cloud-choked sky,

Raging, storming waterfalls cascade the drowning beach,
And fleeting rains cleave the air far beyond your reach,
Streaks of lightning rake across the sodden fading lands,
While mortals quake behind locked doors for judgment day’s at hand,

The deafening thunderclaps swell in a chaotic crescendo,
And raging waves slap the shore far far below,
Tempest tossed docks are thrust out to sea,
And timbers scatter in the wake of this ruthless enemy,

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Anton BRONZE said...
on Sep. 27 2009 at 9:02 pm
Anton BRONZE, N Riverside, Illinois
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This poem is truly exquisit, the flewency of it was fantastic and the wording was perfectly placed.