So this story has to be lengthy, so I should write a lot. I should not have started this story with a so. I am going to make the sentence start with just “this”. Wait I missed a comma, I should add that in. Wait, this isn’t a story, it is a process, but if I change that then I will have to change the other one. I just missed another comma, I should add more commas, everywhere. This is becoming very informal, maybe that’s okay? [My teacher said that that sentence was a run-on, so I guess I should change the comma to a semicolon. I so rarely get to use semicolons correctly, so I am excited to include one here. Why did I use two thats in a row? Anyways, back to what I was typing earlier.] I went in with this being like a revision inspired piece, but it has become a revision process writing. Should I indent this? Because it is like a story, but at the same time I already said it's not a story. I missed the apostrophe. I don’t think this piece is making much sense. I should not have started that sentence with because. But also, I can write what I want because it is my own piece and it is also a first draft. What if this isn’t my first draft and this is actually how it is in its final form and you are reading this right now as if it is a polished final draft? I shouldn’t’ve repeated “final” twice in that sentence. I kind of like “shouldn’t’ve” as a word. It’s kind of funny. That probably won’t make the final draft.