The Moment I Knew | Teen Ink

The Moment I Knew

January 21, 2022
By Anonymous

The night sky, The breathtaking view

We laid there, no thoughts, no worries

The beautiful stars, the quiet whispers

The cool wind, Our hands intertwined

We laid there, no thoughts, no worries

That red fuzzy blanket, The cold concrete

The cool wind, Our hands intertwined

Light music, Forehead kisses, Your white hat

That red fuzzy blanket, The cold concrete

Unforgettable memories, Shining smiles

Light music, forehead kisses, Your white hat

Eyes locking, Inevitable giggles 

Unforgettable memories, Shining smiles

The beautiful stars, The quiet whispers

Eyes locking, inevitable giggles

The night sky, The breathtaking view


The author's comments:

This piece was written about a moment between me and my fiance the night we got engaged. Falling in love so young is such an amazing and scary thing. We have been together since 12 years old and through every problem, we made it through. I had surgery in 2020 after finding out I had a tumor on my pancreas. He spent every night sitting next to me, up all hours of the night just making sure I was okay. A year and a half later when sitting at a beautiful viewpoint I finally asked him, I asked if he would spend the rest of his life with me and the rest is history.  


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