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The Bunny

October 25, 2021
By Anonymous

The pet store just opened and she steadily walked across the aisles to find a pet just for her.  Loud woofs, meows, and sqeaks came from the animals in the cages. Every once in a while she would glance and stop glance and stop until she found the perfect pet just for her. She looked at the bunnies eyes.The bunny looked at her in curiosity. The bunny had long floopy ears, light brown fur, and wide beaming eyes. She picked the bunny up and went up to the cashier, bought the bunny, and carried him far from the pet store to let the bunny have a new life with a caring person.


The author's comments:

In this set piece, I wanted to attempt using something that inspires me  like Fletcher. I also used feelings for what the character was feeling/thinking about the place the story took place. And lastly I tried to use repetition.


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