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Another Life

October 24, 2021
By Anonymous

I looked over at her, the warm summer breeze blowing in her dark obsidian hair. The distant sunset in the back made me feel warm. I wish this moment would never end. “In another life,” she promised.

Lies. There I stood. Flowers in my hand looking in the distance. She was happy now, finally. Without me. I felt tears well up in my eyes as I got on my knees. I thought about all the moments we shared together. Blinded with laughs, smiles, and happiness I failed to see what she really was feeling. 

“In another life,” I said as I placed the flowers on her grave. I wiped off my tears, got up, and walked away. Always remembering the fun times we shared.


The author's comments:

For my set-piece, I wanted to use mood as well as flashbacks as my literary device. I attempted to set the mood as a sad, and depressing mood to sort of tell the reader how they are feeling. I also used a flashback in the beginning of my set-piece to give more information.


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