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Blood Rose

September 14, 2020
By SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
146 articles 22 photos 538 comments

Favorite Quote:
It Will Be Good.


A rose,

red as the wyne of the heart,
the staple of lyfe,
the symbol of pain,
Stood alone lyke we all do,
But surrounded by daisys and daffodils,
Standing out,
Dyvyded by
Many thyngs,
Variables
Lyke science,
We are roses,
Are experiments,
When gyven thys talent or
That defect,
What happens,
Loneliness seeps in, lyke that
Poor rose,
Blood rose,
Rose alone,
Stays alone,
Never wonders,
If it isnt
The only Blood Rose


The author's comments:

sorry its a byt mocking. i deliberitly made it very melodraatic to stryke a sharp comparison


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on Jun. 3 at 10:01 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
146 articles 22 photos 538 comments

Favorite Quote:
It Will Be Good.

hey i just actually read it again for what it is and not as my stupid attempt at poetry before I liked poetry, and I actually kinda relate! i didn't see that comeing.

on Jun. 3 at 9:06 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
146 articles 22 photos 538 comments

Favorite Quote:
It Will Be Good.

thanks again!
around the time i wrote this I met first on the forums and we roleplayed together. apparently it was to hard to read so my writing is normal, even in poetry

on Jun. 3 at 11:29 am
RiverSong_Doctorfan GOLD, Classified, Illinois
10 articles 1 photo 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Spoilers." - River Song

*and*

"Hello, sweetie!"- Also River Song

(Yeah, it's short. Who cares? I love it.)

Like it! And I actually think getting rid of the "I"s is kinda poetic and artistic. Nice.

on Mar. 19 at 9:40 am
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
146 articles 22 photos 538 comments

Favorite Quote:
It Will Be Good.

nope, i cant.

on Mar. 18 at 7:21 pm
FirstSteps5000 BRONZE, Bethesda, Maryland
3 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you reach for the stars, you'll just get the stars. Reach for the heavens and you'll get the stars thrown in." - unknown
"These aren't just stories,"... …"They're whole kingdoms. They're worlds. They're perspectives and opinions you can't offer, from lives you haven't lived." - The Isle of the Lost
"When someone does something hurtful, they have to admit it... [t]hen they have to be punished for it. And maybe then, if they apologize and change, maybe -maybe- *then* they get forgiven." - The One and Only Bob

Hey Sparrow! Nice poem! Idk if it lets you edit after it is posted, but if so, you might want to consider fixing the places where there is a "y" instead of an "i". Other than that, it's awesome!