All Nonfiction
- Bullying
- Books
- Academic
- Author Interviews
- Celebrity interviews
- College Articles
- College Essays
- Educator of the Year
- Heroes
- Interviews
- Memoir
- Personal Experience
- Sports
- Travel & Culture
All Opinions
- Bullying
- Current Events / Politics
- Discrimination
- Drugs / Alcohol / Smoking
- Entertainment / Celebrities
- Environment
- Love / Relationships
- Movies / Music / TV
- Pop Culture / Trends
- School / College
- Social Issues / Civics
- Spirituality / Religion
- Sports / Hobbies
All Hot Topics
- Bullying
- Community Service
- Environment
- Health
- Letters to the Editor
- Pride & Prejudice
- What Matters
- Back
Summer Guide
- Program Links
- Program Reviews
- Back
College Guide
- College Links
- College Reviews
- College Essays
- College Articles
- Back
Evenfall
When dawn arises you are blinded by
A light that shines down on your laughing face
When Suns spread warmth and you so love the sky
Too soon the shadows are to take its place
The world will freeze without its tender glow
You tremble, frightened of the bleak unknown
Until a fierce wind blusters, wild, and blows
At last the kind Sun smiles and takes you home
When daylight wipes away the Dark’s ordeals
And tells you: ‘Move along; it’s long since passed’
When high above the Sun is perched in teal
Your heart in pieces, it still beams, steadfast
The Sun will light your path in life, ablaze
She laughs as you grow up and learn to run
And tries to call upon more happy days,
A time when you still needed loving Suns
When dusk first comes you flee and run and hide
But bloodred light breaks through the silver clouds
When you are lost and scream: ‘Who knocks my pride?’
Out comes the Sun and bellows: ‘You are loud,
My Man, am I forsaken by you? Son,
So soon will flames engulf you, know your faults,
Sad Boy, before my temper dooms your plans
For life without me in it, that must halt’
When up the sky is ink and down burns bright
Reflections of a million heavn’ly eyes
When all around your world is plunged to night
You hug your knees for your one Sun to rise
Your cheeks are shining now and not your smile
You, naïve youth, who did not once foresee
A fallen paradise, so choked and vile
When sunset comes, who owes apologies?

Similar Articles
JOIN THE DISCUSSION
This article has 0 comments.
I wrote "Evenfall" for a school assignment working with iambic pentameter. We were meant to have a repeated word, mine being "when," and several specific moments with literary devices. Mine ended up having some very Western influences, especially concerning Genesis, so I named it "Evenfall." Part of the inspiration was man's fall from grace, and part was because the poem itself ends right after the sun sets. I hope you enjoy!