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October 30, 2019
By Anonymous

It was beautiful. It was peaceful. The briny ocean waves were rushing up against the rocky, sandy shore. Fish swimming in the waves of salt water and kelp, hermit crabs crawling against the tide pools nearby. The gusts of wind blowing the course, rough sand against our tanned faces. We were laying down on the blankets, motionless getting a tan. The sunset was lovely as the shades of blue and bloody red with splotches of yellow were gradually blackening to the darkness of night. Palm tree leaves were rustling as coconuts fell out of the sky like a shooting star down from space. The tide was peaceful and quiet. We were talking about random stuff and having a good time. It was a fine time of our lives as we were digging into every juicy, savory piece of food. Parties are all fun until the sun went down. It was a heavenly bliss, a gift from God until it was all over.


The author's comments:

For this set piece I was using imagery. I’m trying to make this descriptive so that the reader can imagine the setting. In this set piece I’m trying to make this setting as a place very dreamy and peaceful.


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