Love

May 10, 2009
By TaylorC SILVER, Lubbock, Texas
TaylorC SILVER, Lubbock, Texas
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The clues are there; red blushing cheeks and
The obnoxious laughter and light giggles
My feelings for him are like a sweet candy with an undecided aftertaste
Like a fragrant candle that cannot be doused
Roars like the sight of a wildfire daring you to try and contain it
As my emotions run wild i feel safe, secure;loved


The author's comments:
This is a five sense poem and the first line is something with color
second line is sound
third line is taste
fourth line is smell
fifth line is sight
and sixth line is feelings

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on Oct. 24 2009 at 10:58 am
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars" --my best friend
"Do it for love." --sark
"One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so."- Confucius

I really liked this poem. It shows the feelings you have for the person and really opens up the soul for more than just words. If you keep writing like this, I think you would be great!

Zoeybird96 said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 5:01 pm
to tell you the truth, it was ok. it could have been better. maybe you could write a poem about like losing a close friend or having the boy you like reject you.

TaylorC SILVER said...
on May. 18 2009 at 11:22 pm
TaylorC SILVER, Lubbock, Texas
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Please comment honest opinions

TaylorC SILVER said...
on May. 18 2009 at 11:20 pm
TaylorC SILVER, Lubbock, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments
Please comment and give me ideas for other poems and suggestions to make this one better. I also welcom honest opinions




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