drowning | Teen Ink


May 8, 2009
By freakgirl98259 GOLD, Ware, Massachusetts
freakgirl98259 GOLD, Ware, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"look at you, miserable fool get of your knees and your prayes fall apart god has turned his back on you hevens gates are shut and now your knocking on the devils door"

i am drowing
i can not reach the surface.
i see nothing,
but darkness surrounding me.
the more i try
to struggle and fight
the more the current drags me back.
there is no up or down-
just the nothingness that surrounds me,
no matter where i turn.
i swam to far,
now I'm in to deep,
to far under-
no one can hear me-
I'm running out of air-
the seconds tick by-
i can not think,
i can not breath
i only feel numb.
my limbs are growing to tired
to fight this monstrous tide,
and i know longer see any reason to try
my lat breath will soon escape me
stealing my life away

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mojo said...
on Jul. 22 2009 at 9:52 pm
OMG i love this poem!! this is so good! I wish I could write something as good as that! It describes my life pretty well too!