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Beloved
April 30, 2009
When the storm has rolled past and all danger is gone,
I swear to you my love, we will go on.
Our love is as constant as the moon's rising,
Nothing that happens can keep me from trying,
If ever I was separated from you.
With you by my side, the stars are in reach
every day I'm with you, I learn....you teach.
Without you, beloved, life would lose all its' worth
And I, my beloved, would have no place on this earth......
© Courtney P., Alpine, TX
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NeverCaredForKool-Aid GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 6:18 pm
Again, the rhyming was great, and not forced-sounding. The emotion sounds very honest, too.
raychell.faith GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 1:49 pm
i loved this. i do, however, feel like the ending could be... better. it just doesn't leave as strong of an impression as the rest of the poem. i almost think the last two lines could just be taken out completely. it's like they spell out what the whole thing says anyway. <3.
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 4:27 pm
I love this, I can relate to this a lot... :)
