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Peace at Last

April 25, 2009
By Bridie ELITE, Massapequa, New York
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Favorite Quote:
She can because she thinks she can.

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As it pours
And I sit in the car
I can hear the rain pelt
The window shield
I can hear them splatter on
The window exploding
Like fireworks of
Water.
Then we go under
The bridge everything stops.
For that split second the
The world seems peaceful and
Quiet.
Then the fireworks
May live again.

© Terrin C., Humboldt, IA

The author's comments:
my three favorite things to write about are Love, (obviously everyone does) the enviorment, (so beutiful it just surrounds the world and feeds the soul and sences so purely) and pollution (it engulfs the world and slowly chokes it so that there will be nothing left) but i love it when i go under the bridge in a storm. close your eyes take a deep breath and make a wish before you hear the rain against the car again.
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