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Dorms in Colleges and Beyond

November 28, 2018
By mparker2022 BRONZE, Defiance, Ohio
mparker2022 BRONZE, Defiance, Ohio
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The writing titled “ dorms in college… and Beyond,” written by Nicholas W., talks about College Dorms. His writing left me feeling impressed about what he thought of. The article talks about his ideas about college dorms and making them better. His writing left me impressed. Why?  I’m impressed because this is such a great idea to make bigger dorms for people. This gives great people the advantage to meet some other great people and new friends and to save gas and stop pollution as Nicholas says in paragraph 4. It says, “These dorms can also reduce commuting as well as cut pollution and traffic, and residents would likely not have cars.” Nicholas’ article is well written and gives you good valid reasons to agree on this topic about college dorms. He wants to give you a chance to look at them because maybe you'd like them as he says in the last paragraph. It says, “So take a closer look at the dorms when looking at the colleges and imagine them a little newer and nicer, they may be your future.” This article about college dorms leaves me impressed and encouraged to look at them.



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