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He never will see...

April 17, 2009
By MusicL0v3r28 GOLD, Forks, Pennsylvania
MusicL0v3r28 GOLD, Forks, Pennsylvania
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He can't see me because I'm invisible.
I'm transparent.
I smile, he doesn't see.
He doesn't see the real me only my shadow.
Like I'm wearing a cloak hiding myself underneath.
He sees other girls just not me.
I wave... nothing.
I laugh... nothing.
I stare... still... nothing.
He doesn't notice me. He never is. He never will.
I stop trying...
"Emily," I hear a soft, silky voice say.
I turn around seeing him. Seeing the one. Seeing someone I loved inside.

The author's comments:
Just keep waiting... he'll see you someday.

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on Apr. 24 2009 at 12:56 am
trytobepretty1 BRONZE, Sutter Creek, California
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Favorite Quote:
First they came for the communists,
and I didn't speak out because I wasn't a communist.

Then they came for the trade unionists,
and I didn't speak out because I wasn't a trade unionist.

Then they came for the Jews,
and I didn't speak out because I wasn't a Jew.

Then they came for me
and there was no one left to speak out for me.

wow, i know just what you mean.

this is amazing, it gave me hope.

on Apr. 24 2009 at 12:18 am
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

LOVE IT!! It's so true, and the emotion is great!!