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Its getting bad...

September 6, 2009
By stilljollytango1 BRONZE, Mapleton Depot, Pennsylvania
stilljollytango1 BRONZE, Mapleton Depot, Pennsylvania
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Drugs, alcohol and smoking are all bad, but poor diet and exercise is on the i did not mean to have that rhyme. Anyways, Smoking WAS the biggest preventable cause of death. Now its poor diet and exercise.

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I just thought I would throw that fact out there. Food and laziness is killing our youth quicker then cigarettes now.

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Caravana GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 11:07 am
Caravana GOLD, Joplin, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Philippians 4:13 "I can do all things through him who gives me strength."

I like your idea with this but you give no evidence at all. I think this would be great to be in a longer work with statistics to prove your point.

on Jan. 20 2011 at 1:51 pm
SaMiLoVe97 SILVER, Okawville, Illinois
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If it doesnt break your heart it isnt love, if it doesnt break your heart its not enough. Its when youre breaking down with your insides coming out.Thats when you learn what youre made of.-Switchfoot<3

(: I love this. Its short, simple, and gets to the point. But you could of been a tad more detailed(: Keep writing.:D <3 Sami

on Jul. 28 2010 at 1:34 am
stilljollytango1 BRONZE, Mapleton Depot, Pennsylvania
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Well can you blame them? They are force fed images of people in the media that are so skinny, people know they are too far away from getting in that shape so they just throw it all away, luckily I am inventing something that will turn all of this around. I will change peoples lives.

LittleBit said...
on Jul. 3 2010 at 1:00 pm
I like where you were going with this, the problem is you didn't get there. Maybe take it a little farther next time

momo3 said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 9:57 am
momo3, Menasha, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"To forgive is to forget."

Yes this is very true and it is sad that people dont care enough about there bodies and trow their lifes away

stilljolly said...
on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:37 pm
Well I was just writing something simple, I'll start writing way more. Thanks.

ikik said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 2:58 pm
I thought you could have gone a little deeper with your writing but it made a good point.