Taken | Teen Ink


March 10, 2012
By XxwritteninpenxX, Galloway Twp., New Jersey
XxwritteninpenxX, Galloway Twp., New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Words are what holds the world together, otherwise we wouldn't have things like, 'I love you.' That's why I write. I like to say that I'm helping to hold the world together.


Before Darian could answer, a hand held a cloth to his mouth. He gasped for breath, but could draw in none. He could hear Addyson's screams as his head clouded with a thick darkness and his legs caved in from underneath him. He was out.

Addyson was having just as much luck only she had put up much more of a fight than Darian had. She screamed and flailed her arms, trying to break free of their grasp around her. She had seen Darian being dragged away by someone in a dark cloak, and she was certain that she wasn't going to let that happen to her.

“Help! Help! Someone help me, please!” she cried, tears streaming down her face, “God! Please help me!” she prayed.

Addyson's body started to ache and weaken and her perpetrator was able to get a firm hand on her.

“No!” she screamed, but it was too late. They pressed a rag against her mouth and just like Darian, she was out.

Morgan L.


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on Mar. 20 2012 at 2:07 pm
AndriaGromley SILVER, Hillsdale, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Yesterday, upon the stair,
I met a man who wasn’t there
He wasn’t there again today
I wish, I wish he’d go away...

The only bad thing I have to say for the prologue is, you should have given Addyson time to cry, instead of her suddenly having tears streaming down her face. Other than that, great