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Unforeseen Consequences
One day with my beloved, I found myself walking a path, 
 down which I had not yet expected to go. The path was lit by 
 the bright sun, and free from any sadness or wrath.
 
 Suddenly, my beloved turned from me and I fell, calling
 out to her as our hands slipped. And so I fell into darkness,
  landing in a pit of shadows with a great gate looming
 
 before me. Three monsters stood by the gate; a serpent to the right,
 a giant bear to the left, and perched atop the gate was an eagle.
 I was trembling before these three great forces of might, 
 
 when I felt a hand firmly grasp my shoulder. I turned
 and saw a soldier, the great leader of the Trojan Army.
 He was Hector, tamer of horses. I fell to the ground 
 
 on my knees, in awe at his noble presence. He told 
 me to rise, so on my feet I stood. He said to me, “Shake not
 at the sight of these dreadful beasts. You must be bold
 
 and tread through the three great rings of Hell itself,
 if you wish to gain back that which you have lost.” And so 
 we walked forth, passing under the rocky shelf
 
 of the gate, with the three beasts around us, their glaring red
 eyes boring into my very soul. The bear beside me called out in 
 an echoing bellow, “You who dare to enter the lair of the dead
 
 with your beating heart and fresh breath, turn back now or
 you shall perish in eternal hellfire for your sins.” I was speechless,
 hearing those words, but my feet carried me forward, for
 
 we continued on, into the dismal gate
 to discover inside, what would decide my fate.
As we entered the vast cavern, around me I felt a chill
 in the air. It was the feeling of death, stagnant and unchanging, like a still 
 pool, devoid of life. I stared at my surroundings, and darkness filled
 
 every corner of my vision, until Hector, my guide, drew
 a glass orb from the folds of his cloak, and it produced an eerie
 glow, engulfing us in a small sphere of light. Shadows grew
 
 from where before there was nothing, and as the light spread,
 I could see where we were standing. Below our feet was the rocky 
 shore of a great frozen lake, and beneath the ice, scores of the dead
 
 souls of sinners swam in the frigid water.  The pathetic wraiths had
 looks of terror and panic etched on their faces, like words cut in a tomb, 
 and their hands clawed at the ice above their heads. In my heart, I felt sad
 
 for these pathetic souls, but Hector told me, “Do not pity the damned, you
 must remember that they are here for a reason. In life they sinned, so in death 
 they must be punished. While these beings walked upon the earth, they, like you,
 
 had fallen in love. However, they chose not to act on those feelings,
 and so indolence was their sin. So now they are trapped for eternity
 in limbo, and they are called the Smitten. But now we must be hurrying
 
 on for time is short. Come, let us go across the ice.” As we walked
 over the enormous frozen lake , the souls beneath us clawed their frozen fingers
 along the underside of the ice. I forced myself not to gaze at the faces caked
 
 with crystals that were just a few inches below my feet. I could almost
 hear their silent screams as they were denied the breaths that I took in so greedily. 
 However, my willpower failed, and I found my eyes peering through the frost.
 
 I tightly gripped the arm of my guide in fright at the sight that I saw.
 There were dozens of wraiths under my soles, naked and emaciated,
 most of them were just floating in the water, seeming just to gnaw
 
 at the ice, not even having the strength or will to move their arms.
 And those that did were terrifying, inhuman monsters with claws for hands
 that despised me just for the fact that I was alive. Fearing that harm
 
 would come to me if I continued to linger, I quickly stepped forward 
 and hurried on my way. The pack of bodies beneath me followed my 
 path along the ice, until I came to the opposite bank, looking towards 
 
 my next destination, when they twisted away and escaped back
 into the murky depths of the gelid lake. I could see them for a few
 moments, like long skeletal fish, they swam down to the black
 
 chasm under the lake, until they disappeared from my sight as they 
 were lost in the shadows, hiding from their sins that had led them astray.
Hector called to me, and I realized that he had kept walking while
  I had stopped. Quickly I ran to his side, and before us I saw a truly
 horrific sight. The entirety of Hell was placed before my eyes. Miles
 
 of tortured souls were stretched in front of me, with the deepest 
 reaches being obscured by the foul pollution in the air. Turning my 
 head to my guide, I looked to him put to words what even the best
 
 wordsmith alive,  could not describe. “This is Hell,” he spoke to
 me. “The final resting place of all souls who have wasted away their
 short lives by doing wrong to those who gave them their hearts. You
 
 see before you the three great divisions of this wretched abyss.
 Each ring contains a different category of sinners that are punished 
 according to their respective sin. You have already seen an example of this
 
 when we crossed the icy lake behind us, and you will experience it 
 again in the circles to come. Both of the first two rings are separated into 
 two smaller divisions, with the third circle having three in order to fit
 
 all of the deceivers. Deceit is the worst category of sin, so it is the sin
 that is placed deepest in Hell. The circle before deceit is abuse, and then
 exploitation is the one that looms in front of us. Are you ready to begin
 
 this descent into Hell? Do not think that these tortured souls are the only
 ones being tested. You are on a journey of discovery, and there will be 
 many trials for you to face before the end. However, there is hope. Lonely
 
 you may be now, but if fate allows, you will see your beloved again.
 Come now, let us hurry. Too long we have dawdled here.” And so on
 we went. We clambered down a small hill, and suddenly there was a rain
 
 of gold falling on our shoulders. “What is this madness?” I cried out.
 “Money falling from the sky, surely this cannot be Hell!” Coins of all 
 sorts littered the terrain, paving it with the fortunes of kings. Throughout
 
 the glittering sea of riches, great boulders were strewn, with sticks
 poking out from underneath, looking comically like giant beetles. 
 I could also see sticks jutting from between the coins, like erratic
 
 branches being blown by turbulent winds, they violently twitched 
 in the air. However, there were no winds under the earth to sway 
 these sticks. And what was that uproar I perceived, which mixed
 
 with the clink and clatter of falling gold? A look of terror befell
 my face as the true nature of this circle became clear. The skeletal arms,
 that rose and shook from the piles of coins, marked the brutal cells
 
 for the damned souls they belonged to. It was from these trapped
 bodies that the screams echoed, blending with the cacophony of the
 storming money. As I stared, dumbfounded, at the scene, a hand grabbed
 
 my ankle. Frantically, I kicked it away and cowered behind my guide. 
 “These depraved souls are the first division of Exploiters. In life, they
 cared only for money, and used others to obtain it, so when they died,
 
 their souls become forever trapped in this circle. While they were among
 the living, they were a burden on their loved ones, so now in Hell
 a burden of that which they so coveted is placed upon them. Be strong
 
 now, and let us continue forth before they try to take you for a second
 time.” We headed in the direction of the next division, past the insect-like
 boulders, and the bony arms, which were now gently waving, as if to beckon
 
 me to ensnare my legs and drag me down to join in their ghastly torment.
 I needed to tread carefully so as not to trample the faces of these already
 tortured souls. It was in this way that my guide and I went
 
 on to the next division, and it was there I faced
 things, which from my mind I cannot erase.
We came upon deep pit in the ground, which was filled almost to the brim 
 with writhing flames. Like snakes, they twisted through the empty space,
 spitting their venomous fires on the tortured beings within. I skimmed 
 
 the crater in search of the souls I knew must reside down there. Hector
 grabbed the collar of my shirt and pulled me away from the inferno saying,
 “Do not get too close unless you wish to fall to your death and become a specter
 
 like the rest of the damned.” As I was retreating, a monstrous wraith burst
 from the flames, its charred skin hanging like crisped paper from its
 blackened bones, and it let out a deafening shriek, which even the worst
 
 creatures on Earth could not have produced. My heart leapt from my chest,
 and one of the claws of the beast, ( for surely it could not be human), passed
 just inches from the tip of my nose. The powers above surely had blessed
 
 my journey for me to survive such an encounter. “Contrary to your belief,”
 my guide said to me, “that indeed was one of the sinners in this second
 division of the sin of Exploitation. It was one of the souls who in life
 
 would pass on from woman to woman, or man to man, without a care
 for any emotion other than physical pleasure. The heat of their passion 
 drove them to their sin, so in death they are punished in Hell by flares
 
 that burn and destroy their bodies. Now I implore you, do not
 pause again, unless you wish this be the place where you rot.
As per Hector’s wishes, I did not stop again. We went on to pass into
 the second circle of Hell, the ring of abusers. The anterior division did 
 not frighten me as the others had, however, it had a very eerie quality. Too
 
 short I time I believe we spent there, in order for me to grasp a full understanding,
 but I will describe my thoughts, as well as those ideas given by my guide. 
 This was the ring where the verbal abusers were punished. Wandering
 
 the barren white landscape as ghostly shadows, they had no physical form.
 Along the edges of the cliff entering the circle, there were forty-two 
 demons placed at even intervals. Their faces were great horns, and from
 
 these instruments, an almost visible wave of sound reverberated 
 constantly through the division. As my guide, Hector, informed me, 
 these souls in life destroyed the essence of their partners by berating
 
 them with harsh words. They essentially destroyed the soul of their
 close ones, so in death they are as empty and shapeless as they caused
 others to be. And just as they verbally abused while living, so they are
 
 abused in kind in death. During our passage through, my guide gave
 to me cotton and wax with which to plug my ears, so I was not afflicted
 by the dissonance. I wandered alongside some of the shadows, and having
 
 no hearing, it was an eerie experience, this black and white world, 
 with living shadows flickering like the flame of a candle, as if any moment
 it would be snuffed from existence. To me it seemed bliss, and I twirled
 
 like an elegant dancer, in a trance, with no sound to distort my thoughts,
 staring at the hypnotizing souls around me. I was irreverently pulled from 
 my daze by a sudden earsplitting blast of sound, and I realized I ought
 
 to have remembered I was still in Hell, and on my own personal journey,
 my mission to recover my beloved. Hector scolded me for my slight deviation 
 from the path, but quickly forgave me, for it was not to bad a mistake. We
 
 hurried on to the second division after that, which I do not like to remember
 because it was a terrible sight. Pits were spotted along the entirety of the circle,
 and from these emanated  a great many screams of pain. The tortured members
 
 of the pits held a steady stream of curses and yells that I heard, while I passed
 through the circle. Hector allowed me to stop at the edge of one of the pits, and I wished
 he had urged me forward, for the sight, frightened me to tears. Claws rasped
 
 the stone base inside; claws of great, indescribable beasts. I could see now why
 the prisoners screamed so violently. The monsters chased the souls around and around
 the bottom of the basin, as if for sport, like a dog chases a rabbit. The echoing cries
 
 of the sinners were created when one of them was hooked by a claw of a beast.
 I saw one creature throw a poor soul twenty feet above its head, toying with its
 prey, and when the soul fell back down, he was impaled by two talons, and wrested
 
 apart in a gory mess, his organs flopping to the ground with a squelch, and
 blood splattering the walls, the beast, and even other sinners, adding to their screams. 
 As if to personally disgust me even more, the beast glanced at my with its great eye, and
 
 began to maliciously devour the twice-dead corpse. I had to turn  my eyes from the sight
 and promptly vomited by the side of the pit. Hector briskly led me on, saying to me, 
 “As gruesome as it may be, their punishment is well deserved, for they used their might
 
 to physically harm those that held them dear. So in death, their torment is to be harmed
 themselves, by monsters which represent their own monstrous personalities. You
 still must keep in mind that these are damned souls that reside here, so do not be alarmed
 
 at the harshness with which they are treated. Come, let us continue.” 
 So on we walked, my insides churning, as we went to the next venue.
Entering the boundary of the third and final ring of Hell, I instantly noticed something
 strange. I could see no signs of torture, or even of any sinners. In the first division,
 all I could see was a field of what appeared to be mirrors, cracked and tilting. 
 
 It was entirely silent. Not a sound was to be heard, save for my own ragged breaths. 
 I had an ominous feeling about this place and I asked, “Surely this is not the final circle? 
 Do we not have two more divisions to cross before the end?” This part seemed to be death
 
 in itself, the mirrors like tombstones in a deserted graveyard. “You are correct in
 that there are two divisions left in Hell, but they are past where you need to be. This is
 the end of your journey. Three tests you encountered along your path, and within
 
 this circle you will discover your fate.” Like a shining beacon radiating throughout 
 the entirety of the world, a bright angel descended from above and gently took my hand.
 She, for only a woman could posses this divine beauty, led me, and as we were about 
 
 to strike the first mirror, she gracefully lifted me and we glided through the air and
 landed before a mirror with three distinct cracks running through the surface. The angel
 gestured for me to proceed closer, and I slowly walked forward. Tentatively, with my hand
 
 outstretched as if to touch the surface, I stepped once, twice, to position myself perfectly
 in front of the mirror so I could see what was reflected within. To my surprise, it was 
 blank. Hector spoke from behind me, “The mirrors in this, the circle of oath-breakers, only
 
 reflect those who have passed away. If you examine the other mirrors around you, you 
 will find the souls of the sinners trapped within. This here, is your mirror, Harlin. In life, 
 you did wrong to your beloved by deceiving her and for that sin, so should you too
 
 be imprisoned here, with the other souls. You would be a distorted reflection in Hell,
 your three oaths broken, shown here by the three cracks running down your mirror. 
 However, you alone of all the souls in Hell and on Earth, were given a  chance to redeem yourself,
 
 to absolve your soul from all sin, so when it you day to pass, you may ascend into Heaven.
 That chance was represented by three tests here in Hell, one for each of your sins. The first
 was the act of entering Hell, which you have obviously passed.” After he said this, seven
 
 rays of light shone from the hand of the angel, landing on the mirror, and healing the first
 crack. “Your second test was in the circle of Exploitation. When the damned grabbed you in the 
 piles of gold, and in the flames, there was a divine power protecting you. And so you passed
 
 the second test.” Again, the rays shone and sealed the second crack. “And finally, the third
 test. In the second circle, the division of verbal abuse, you were able to be taken out of the trance
 that was placed upon you by the shadows. The three tests completed, you are absolved.” At his word,
 
  the angel suddenly rushed forward, shattering the mirror into thousands of glittering crystals,
 and came to a halt where the glass had stood. I could now see the features of this divine creature
 and awe flooded into my face as I saw before me the face of my beloved. “Even though I left, still
 
 I followed your journey through this place,” she said. “I was the force that kept for from harm
 and help you to complete your tests. Because your heart stayed true, so I was able to help you,
 and now we are reunited.” She surged forward, fusing with my being, with my soul, warm
 
 tendrils of light traveled along my body, and we had become one. My task complete, 
 my beloved returned to me, there was no longer a reason to remain in this dismal place. 
 The veins of light lifted off our new body, forming great, golden wings. Our two feet
 
 left the ground, the wings spread and we took flight to find a way out. We passed over
 the second division of deceit, we saw the caged souls with their morphing red, blue, and green
 bodies, writhing in pain. And we entered the final ring of hell, the scene of ever
 
 lasting torment for those who had been unfaithful to the ones they loved. Limbs were strewn
 across the plain, demons running to and fro beneath us, hacking with their great swords
 at the already mangled and bloody bodies. In the center of the circle, the very center of hell, lay drawn
 
 a giant of a man. From each arm and leg, a demon pulled and stretched him taut. His screams 
 of pain were like none I had yet heard, but my beloved kept me calm and we remained 
 one and the same. The mans limbs were torn from his body, and from the wounds poured streams
 
 of scarlet blood, and his howls intensified. We aimed our self at the center of his torso,
 for it was through him that the path out led. Our shining wings shifted and formed a new
 tool for our use. We were shaped like an arrow, golden as the sun, and we were shot through
 
 the air, pierced the man dead center and traveled straight and true. On the other side, we
 stood, brushing the blood and gore from our shoulders. We were done. The journey was 
 finally complete. We could rest. A rock was a few steps away, but we collapsed on one knee
 
 before we could reach it. We were tired. The light died from our body, and we separated 
 into our individual selves. However, we still had one mind. With our combined conscience,
 we were heightened to new awareness. We could now see clearly what before was muddled
 
 by misunderstanding of each other. From above,
 a light shone, illuminating us. This was love.
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