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Losing Memories

October 2, 2011
By JoyfulCheers SILVER, st. croix falls, Wisconsin
JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
smile at the world and it will smile back


Younge love has filled the mind of a 17 year old girl named Alyson. She has fell head over heals for a football player named Danny. They have been with each other for a while. But what happens when one day the love of your love gets ripped away form you forever, and you dont have any chance to get him back? Memories are stuck with Alyson for awhile. But she has only one thing left of Danny, but would she stay with it?

Erin M.

Losing Memories

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on Apr. 27 2014 at 3:45 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Hey, just to let you know, I'm writing this live so you can get a better sense of what I'm feeling as I read it. I apologize in advance because this type of commenting often synthesizes a super long comment. "That afternoon when I got out of the car, disaster was kicking in." are. Love how comforting her mom is. So many stories have unloving, mean parents that don't care one bit. I like how yours is different. You also changed her name.. First it was Amanda, now it's Alyson. Pick! HAHA COW THIGHS! Hilarious, right there. Wow. University --should be--> anniversary. Aspect--should be--> expect. I like the description of the makeup, but I wish she would tell us about the scar. WOW. Cliffhanger ending. Nice job! I can definitely feel her panic. You have a good way with words and you're amazing at portraying emotion, but I think you can work harder at using the correct words and using better grammar. Overall, super captivating, I definitely enjoyed it.

on Oct. 13 2012 at 10:03 am
Ultimatewriter, Ventnor City, New Jersey
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on Jan. 4 2012 at 8:03 pm
Knightingale BRONZE, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Being a writer is like showing your but to the world
"fairy tail's Jet"

Really liked it keep going :)

on Nov. 2 2011 at 6:00 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
10 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

loved it!!!! thats more than wonderful.  You have amazing talents to write like that. i think you are a natural writer :) keep up the wokr girly!!! you could be famous some day :)

on Oct. 24 2011 at 4:21 pm
Sarajustine BRONZE, Massapequa, New York
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I'd like to see more! :)

Nar Nar said...
on Oct. 17 2011 at 7:18 pm
Omg I wanna read morre! :)

Erin M. said...
on Oct. 17 2011 at 7:07 pm
thx glad u enjoyed it

Nar Nar said...
on Oct. 17 2011 at 7:05 pm
Hey this is wonderful!! :D