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Obsessive and Controlling

June 23, 2011
By Anonymous


Daniel has fallen so deeply in love with Katie he cannot do a thing about it. And Katie is flattered by it. But something goes haywire and a nightmare hits the gas headed for a deep cliff, taking Katie with it.


Obsessive and Controlling

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This book has 2 comments.

quiet1 said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 8:54 pm
quiet1, Fort Mill, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Live, Laugh, Love
Girls rule, Boys drool.
Love will always find its way in.
If you don't like me at my worst, you don't deserve me at my best.
You drive, you text, you die.

It's rushed like that because that's what the relationship felt like. I know that sounds bad but it's true. It's not quite done I have about a year left of info to do. Sorry about the grammar. I'm not the best speeler

on Jun. 27 2011 at 1:14 pm
freeflow23 GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Saul saw Goliath as too big to kill. David saw he was too big to miss.

This was okay, but it didn't seem finished. It had some grammar issues and felt too rushed. Maybe spend more time describing each chapter so the reader can understand what's going on.