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The Asylum

August 21, 2018
By Ethan_Bradshaw BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
Ethan_Bradshaw BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Once upon a time in a dark and mossy insane asylum. Young Marcus visited this asylum back in the late 1900’s. He and his friend Devin both found out about this asylum through a mutual friend. They bother planned on visiting this place around 1 am that day. Little did they know this trip was going to take a very awful turn.


12 pm rolled around with both Marcus and Devin curious out of their minds. Before they left they had to make sure everything was set up the way they needed it to be for everything to go to plan. Marcus grabbed his backpack that had bolt cutters to cut the lock on the gate and black mask to disguise themselves. Devin called his mom to let her know that he was going to stay with Marcus and watch a movie with him for the night.


Marcus and Devin decided to start the hour-long drive late. At this point, they would reach Ender Town by 1:30 am. They loaded up the 2002 dodge challenger and started the long drive. At around 1:15 am the deep paralyzing feelings started to haunt over the two boys. Sooner or later Devin and Marcus reached their destination. With the bolt cutters, Marcus snapped the lock and gained their entrance path to the mossy brick walls that they need to vault over. Once they vaulted the wall they both climbed through the bloody broken window. Wondering how the blood got there.


“Hello”? Marcus called out wondering if anyone had been hurt climbing the window.

It wasn’t even two feet before Marcus and Devin tripped over a Phenomenal Chained Suit.

Staggering back to their feet Marcus and Devin got back to their feet. Walking out of the first room they realized all of the rooms were bitter cold and broken caution signs cluttered the hallways. At this point, both men were very frightened and were debating on the fact to return to safety. At that very moment, Marcus opened a closet with a vast amount of handcuffs With Marcus's prior knowledge of how bad patients were treated at this asylum he felt a knot in his stomach as he closed the closet doors.


Devin had decided to wander off by himself and explore the establishment more in-depth. Devin found a decayed granola bar and wondered how long this snack had been in this place. He entered a room that read “administration only” inside the room was flipped furniture, torn apart chairs, and a single smeared bloody napkin. Devin also found some ripped sandals that had looked to have blood on them. He then found torn shower curtains that seemed to be very faded with the hint of red stains. As Devin discovered all of this in one single room he started to realize why this place was shut down. This was an abusive violent center for mentally ill people.


Marcus had begun to find other hidden parts of the asylum like the frail church that was hidden away behind some trees and a bush. With the broken glass bottles, it was pretty difficult to operate in this kind of condition. As he entered into the church he found a homeless old lady with cats surrounding her. Marcus decided to step out of that weird place and wanted to find Devin to escape what they thought was going to be a fun night.


Devin had found some creepy stuff as sticks that had blood on them with what he thought to be was the weapon they would use to beat the patients. It was now around 3 am and they still had an hour drive to get back to their homes. As Devin was thinking to himself he heard the sound of rubber hitting the gravel payment and then… headlights hit the window with a vivid beam. Devin ducked down and knew this night was in for a crazy turn.


Little did the two boys know the asylum was being investigated and they had FBI security guards during the day to make sure nobody broke into the place and steal any crime scene evidence. Devin started to crawl toward the way he had thought Marcus went. He heard the voices of the men say “Somebody has broken the lock and is in their”. Devin heard this and decided to stop crawling and to be extremely silent. He heard the four FBI garuds open the front door with the key, with them they had shiney flashlights. They were no more than 20 feet away from him. Devin saw a sheet and climbed into the bed and put the sheet over himself.


What happened after this was unbelievable, Devin moved his face to the right side and saw a dead corpse. Sitting there was a lifeless person with bugs and worms all over the face. Devin could not help himself he screamed in fear and jumped out of the bed. The FBI Agents were shocked to discover the body and got Devin out of the asylum. Devin started to cry that his friend Marcus was still in their. The agents drew their firearms and took out there flashlights and persuaded north. Marcus had been hiding as well since he saw the lights and heard Devin scream.


A couple hours after not finding Marcus the FBI agents called it a night and told Devin they would bring out the search team later that day to find Marcus. As the officer was done saying his sentence they all locked back to what they thought were Marcus. No...this was not Marcus, this was a devilish looking dog running straight towards them. They all jumped in the van and turned on the engine and drove off never to come back to the asylum. Leaving Marcus behind.


Almost 25 years later Marcus was found torn to pieces many people in the town believe his cause of death was from the dog like creature. Yet Devin is the only real person who knows what happened that scary night and he will be the only person to know what happened inside the asylum.



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