Think | Teen Ink


June 7, 2010
By iluvnacho PLATINUM, Somewhere, Colorado
iluvnacho PLATINUM, Somewhere, Colorado
28 articles 1 photo 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Find the beauty in the ugly\"-Jason Mraz 5-19-10
\"Be kinder than nessicary because everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle.\" Unknown 11-29-10

"No. You can't do this to me," I beg barely above a whisper. I know she can hear me just fine. I flinch as a twig snaps under her feet. She leans in closer. So close, that even through the darkness, I can make out the hatred burning in her brown eyes.
"I can do anything I want to you," She hisses, maddened by my speaking. I take a punch to the face before I stumble on the dirt ground. I want to shield myself with my hands, but the rope around my wrists are much too tight. I whimper, so afriad."We must meet eye to eye little girl," she indelicatly demands as she stabs her heel into my shoulder blade. I squeeze my eyes, shaking."I am the boss. Once you abandon hope, I will let you out." And with that, I hear the click click of her heels as she walks up the steps of the curling staircase.
It takes me while to calm down my breathe. Slowly, I struggle to get on my feet. Abandon hope? Please. I'm much more stronger than that. I look up, to only see darkness. Think. There must be a way out of here. Just think.

The author's comments:
I'm honestly not sure. I like the idea of strength and hope, so this is what it came out to be.

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BluBliss GOLD said...
on Nov. 22 2011 at 10:16 am
BluBliss GOLD, New York, New York
14 articles 0 photos 161 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bella's love for Edward was like, "Omg. He's hot. He's mine because he sparkles. Now I'll brood the wholle book while I'm with him."

How teh girl is shaking is a really I like this. Interesting. :D

on Jul. 11 2010 at 4:11 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 475 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

You should continue it. I wanna know how this young girl is. Is the woman entrapping her like some kinda of evil witch or something? Or does the narrator have two split personalities? Keep going, I want to know more. :)

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 9:54 am
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

loved it, its a very gripping story. Can you check out some of my stuff?