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What if...

July 27, 2009
By JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
19 articles 0 photos 44 comments

What if I told you that I wanted you? That my bones rattled with the thought of your lips close to mine, and mountains crumbled at the thought of your touch. What if I told you that I wanted you with everything in me. I'd give up the smoking and drinking, the countless hours of sex with other women and was just with you. Your breath makes the sun rise, and dusk is jealous of your beauty. You are everything to me. My rock. My cure. My addiction. My place is here with you. What if...

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carijoy SILVER said...
on Aug. 22 2009 at 6:24 am
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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I LOVE THIS!!!! Your work is amazing, I'm hoping you're considering taking up a career in the writing field someday... I can't wait to read more of your work.

AbbyNormal9 said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 2:49 am
Almost more like poetry than fiction. Very edgy. There was a sense of despair, addiction... overall, just really cool. I liked it :)