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More than a Dream

June 11, 2009
By Lynette BRONZE, Rio Grande, Texas
Lynette BRONZE, Rio Grande, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Love is when the other person's happiness is more important than your own.”
H. Jackson Brown,Jr.

The wind blew steadily through the trees naked branches. The moon was bright illuminating our way down a narrow path. A single brown strand of my hair brushed my frozen cheek. We stopped in silence my hand held safely in his as a hundred flowers came into view.

My heart threatened to burst out of my chest. Instinctively, my hand tightened around his and I blinked back tears of ultimate happiness. His eyes met mine making my face burst with emotion.

“How’d you get all these in fall?” I laughed embracing him tightly as I nodded my head towards the flowers.

He pulled me back and smiled. His eyes twinkled a million responses…” I love you.”

The author's comments:
It was a dream......

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This article has 3 comments.

on Aug. 6 2009 at 2:17 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

great job! and i love the idea you got from a dream and used it in writing. i liked this dream :) good job! check out some of my work :)

on Jun. 23 2009 at 2:41 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

Simply BEAUTIFUL! i wish i had dreams like that. Mine are more like being chased by an evil TV remote and i wake up remembering i forgot to turn off my TV! lol. THanks for commenting on my work!

on Jun. 17 2009 at 7:53 pm
MoreThanYouKnow PLATINUM, Camarillo, California
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thats amazing i wish i had dreams as good as this one! and thanx 4 the comments on my work!!!