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Love Story

May 6, 2022
By YsabelLopez-sosa78 BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
YsabelLopez-sosa78 BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
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My wife doesn’t talk much anymore; she’s still a delight; neighbors complain about a foul stench; I can’t seem to notice; when I hold her boney fingers I feel like she’ll just fall apart; a woman from the floor
above asked who I was talking to; she gave me a cool glance when I
mentioned my wife; she sits limply on her chair by the window; the
skeletal hands still resting in her lap, her skin turning grey while flies
roam around her; the worms crawl in and then crawl out, maybe pets are
what we needed; the worms and flies are odd, but she’s my wife, I love
her, even when her skin eventually rots; still, we’ll be together, forever.


The author's comments:

My teacher made us write one sentence stories and I was thinking about how Carl Tanzler kept the corpse of a woman be became obsessed with and I was also listening to a music box playlist. It's not directly related to him but just the idea of someone keeping the body of their loved one, delusional that they are still alive.


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on May. 16 2022 at 12:02 pm
TessaDreamAuthor_3000 PLATINUM, Tomball, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The way I see it, if you want the rainbow, you gotta put up with the rain." - Dolly Parton
" Balance your life with spiritual experiences that remind and prepare you for continued, daily ministering to others." - M. Russell Ballard
"Love is expressed in a smile, a wave, a kind comment, a compliment." - Thomas S. Monson

Kinda creeped me out,not gonna lie, but the wording was amazing. Lol

on May. 15 2022 at 6:53 am
anyabeatrice GOLD, Encino, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Give a girl the right shoes and she can conquer the world."
-Marilyn Monroe

Super cool!