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A Flat Fall

February 6, 2010
By Lynette BRONZE, Rio Grande, Texas
Lynette BRONZE, Rio Grande, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“Love is when the other person's happiness is more important than your own.”
H. Jackson Brown,Jr.

My life seemed to be flashing in sudden heart beats. One moment I was on the plain black rug the next everything went blank. My eyes blinked furiously as I tried to comprehend the words that had just been spoken.

“No. It can’t be,” I mumbled as tears swirled threateningly down my bright green eyes.

My chest was heaving as my heart threatened to stop. My stomach lurched as strong, cold arms lifted me off.

“NOO!” I bellowed. “You can’t just do that! You can’t! No!”

The author's comments:
I just wrote this now...I hope you have your own view of what could be happening...I have my own...

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