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Pool

February 8, 2024
By helenxie777 BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
helenxie777 BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
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I hate this water. 

It’s freezing, yet boiling me alive. I’m gasping for air, flailing like a sparrow on a sadistic glue trap. My burning lungs crush the strength of my voice. I force my eyes open to the world above, where hands lay outstretched in the promise of aid. Warped faces crease their brows and call my name, but I cannot let them have the satisfaction of salvation. It is my responsibility to escape. I seize the edge of the tiled wall and drag myself out limb by limb, sputtering and coughing up water and spit. 

I come back to the pool the next morning.  The water is stagnant and placid, clear and docile. I send gentle ripples away from my fingertips, watching them roll across the surface. How was I so naive to have fallen in? 

A frantic splashing draws my attention to the far side of the pool. Familiar sounds rouse my curiosity, and I rise to my feet, gazing towards the commotion. There is another person drowning, whose garbled cries for help echo plaintively off the glossy walls. A twisted smile blooms across my face. Putrid, vile hatred presses against my throat. 

I turn and walk the other way. 



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Caleb80 said...
on Mar. 13 at 1:55 pm
Caleb80, Cortland, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win." - Stephen King

This was an exceptionally story. Although short, it entailed all of the required elements of a good story: the twist. Keep writing! I would also appreciate it if you could read my story. It is titled "The Shadow Theory." I have been awaiting some readers, and you may be the one of the first to read it. I thoroughly enjoyed "Pool," and I hope that you enjoy "The Shadow Theory!"