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Who's After Me

June 5, 2018
By CompoundArcher GOLD, Broomfield, Colorado
CompoundArcher GOLD, Broomfield, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I Have Not Failed. I've Just Found 10, 000 Ways That Something Won't Work." Thomas Edison

"Surely this world-so beautifully diversified in its forms and motions-could not have arisen except from the perfectly free will of God, who provides and governs all things." Roger Cotes

"Don't doubt the Creator, because it is inconceivable that accidents alone could be the controller of this universe.'' Isaac Newton

"In the end, it's not the years in your life that count. It's the life in your years." Abraham Lincoln


The wind whipping through my hair as I ran through the dark, perilous forest. They were after me; five of them. Tall, dark-skinned, with long black hair that ran down their bare backs. Their shadow ladened faces had bright yellow and blood red paint striped across them.

They made the battle cries of animals as they swiftly approached my still shadow.I was frozen with fear as I turned around to see them just reaching my shadow, the one that belonged to a soon to be captive- ME.



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on Jul. 28 2018 at 8:23 pm
CompoundArcher GOLD, Broomfield, Colorado
10 articles 2 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I Have Not Failed. I've Just Found 10, 000 Ways That Something Won't Work." Thomas Edison

"Surely this world-so beautifully diversified in its forms and motions-could not have arisen except from the perfectly free will of God, who provides and governs all things." Roger Cotes

"Don't doubt the Creator, because it is inconceivable that accidents alone could be the controller of this universe.'' Isaac Newton

"In the end, it's not the years in your life that count. It's the life in your years." Abraham Lincoln

Nice! It sure works though!

on Jul. 19 2018 at 4:30 pm
WolfWhisperer0911, Austin, Texas
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@CompoundArcher XD Don't worry, we all have our weird ways of being inspired. Mine are watching old cartoons and listening to diverse music.

on Jul. 15 2018 at 4:05 pm
CompoundArcher GOLD, Broomfield, Colorado
10 articles 2 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I Have Not Failed. I've Just Found 10, 000 Ways That Something Won't Work." Thomas Edison

"Surely this world-so beautifully diversified in its forms and motions-could not have arisen except from the perfectly free will of God, who provides and governs all things." Roger Cotes

"Don't doubt the Creator, because it is inconceivable that accidents alone could be the controller of this universe.'' Isaac Newton

"In the end, it's not the years in your life that count. It's the life in your years." Abraham Lincoln

Thanks! It was inspired by a bunch of middle school boys running around rampant playing some game. Hahahaha!!! Yeah... weird inspiration.

on Jul. 12 2018 at 1:40 pm
WolfWhisperer0911, Austin, Texas
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@CompoundArcher Wow, that is a very short story with a cliffhanger. Great job anyway! :)


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