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May 23, 2018
By tdizzle223 BRONZE, Tremonton, Utah
tdizzle223 BRONZE, Tremonton, Utah
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You become a character in your favorite video game, and…

My story: One day I got invited to play a game called Fortnite. When I turned on my Xbox One I could smell a burning smell. I brushed it off and started to play. While I was about to fall down on a cliff, the Xbox remote started to turn a red color. I then started to smell a burning smell again my remote was smoking. Then I saw my character on the screen start to talk to me. He said, “Tasian we need your help a meteorite is about to hit one of our biggest towns, Tilted Towers.” I was very confused and ask what could I do, but right then the remote turn even more red and I got sucked up in the game. I remember waking up on a roof. I couldn’t remember were I was. Right then I heard someone call my name it was the same guy that was talking to me seconds before. I looked at my hands and they were cartoonish, I was wearing a black suit. The guy whose name is Rabbit Raider he was wearing a bunny suit with a hockey mask. We started to get ready for our fight against the meteorite. We got in the spaceship and took off towards it. It was getting brighter every second we were going up. We picked up our pickaxes and started to break chunks off it. The meteorite was getting closer towards Tilted Towers. The smell of fire started to fill our lungs, the meteorite was as hot as lava. The brightness of it was like looking at the sun.  We had to get of it to save our lives. It was still as large as Mars, we had no idea of what to do. The town was about to be destroyed, we quickly went back towards Tilted Towers, and we could smell the meteor. It was getting closer, we had about 1 minute to run, the only place we could go was a small hill by it. The meteor was as close and it was sorin in. We closed our eyes and was ready for the impact. I woke up in a lawn chair and looked around, I noticed that there was a fire that I had built. The smell was from the fire, but when I looked up I noticed that I was in a building. I walked over to a window and I noticed that I was still in Tilted Towers. There was people running from a bright light. I ran outside and noticed that a bright light was coming towards us. It was the meteorite, I ran but someone grabbed me, it was a man with a spacesuit, He told me to embrace the rock. I got out of his grip and ran. The impact of the rock sent me flying into a rock, I got knocked out. I woke up in my bed and felt my face I was dreaming it all, but then I heard Rabbit Raider talking from the TV. I looked up and he said, “Tasian we need you again.” So I grabbed my suit and got my remote and clicked the button “Go to Tilted.” Let’s start another adventure……… THE END


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This is my story starter about FORTNITE.


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SLAYER_26 said...
on Sep. 10 2018 at 11:46 am
SLAYER_26, Glendale, Arizona
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nice story but you should play spider man the new game