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Final Breath (fractured fairy tale)

January 17, 2017
By BabyKitten BRONZE, Brampton, Ontario
BabyKitten BRONZE, Brampton, Ontario
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Favorite Quote:
"Insecurity kills all that is beautiful"


 It was Friday the 13th. The sky was dark and the air was freezing cold. Little Red riding hood was getting ready for bed when she remembered that she left the cookies in the oven. She knew that grandma loved her Halloween cookies. The cookies were crunchy on the outside and soft on the inside with little orange and black chocolate chips. The house started to smell like the pumpkin spice candles you would find at Yankee Candle. Little Red stared to take out her cookies and put it in her little black and orange basket that had mini pumpkins on the inside of the napkins she neatly placed in her basket.
Little Red let the cookies cool in the basket while she went to go finish getting ready. She started to get dressed and look nice for her weak old grandmother who barely recognized who any one was. Her grandma had dementia. She was only 72! Little Red also knew her grandmother loved red roses so she bought some at the store the other night. She carefully placed the roses neatly on the cookies and proceeded to finish getting ready. By that time Little Red was all prepared to go into the scary woods. Little Red got her flashlight out and put her dark red cape on so she wouldn’t get cold. Little Red noticed the beautiful big full moon in the dark sky. She took a few minutes to look at the moon and then started making her way into the dark forest.
She had heard some noises but she didn’t let it bother her. Little Red started to get paranoid. Even if she heard an owl she let out a small gasp. Every little thing frightened her.
Little Red finally reached her grandmother’s house. She loved her grandmother’s house. It always smelt like roses. On the outside, her grandmother had a beautiful garden with red roses everywhere. The windows had pink curtains with flowers on them that would flow in the wind. Little Red opened the front door and smelt the beautiful roses. She turned on the lights and proceeded into her grandmothers room. Her grandmother was laying in her hospital bed drinking green tea. Little red said “Hey grandma, I brought you your favorite type of cookies!”.
Grandma told little red to get a chair and hold her hand. Little red loved the feeling of her grandmas soft warm hands. Grandma asked for a cookie and little red feed it to her.
Little Red knew it was getting late so she decided to tell her grandma she had to go because she knew she had work tomorrow. She gave her grandma a kiss on the for head and headed for the front door. Little Red put on her dark red cape and left the house.
On the way home she started singing to herself. Then all of a sudden a wolf jumped out of the forest and started chasing her. Little red was so scared! She didn’t know what to do so she ran deeper into the forest and was lost. She ran all the way into a little old dirty house that looked like it had been there for ages.
By that time the wolf had lost her. Little Red went up the stairs in the old house and sat in a corner to catch her breath. In the corner of the room she saw a figure. The figure was sitting in a pile of blood and it began to giggle. The figure began to get closer and closer to little red. Little Red turned on her flash light and what she saw changed her life forever….. It was a clown!!!
The clown had a big knife. Little red began to run for the closest window she could find. Little Red then jumped out of the window and began running for her life. The clown began chasing her. Little Red thought she found a good hiding spot… but she was wrong.
The wolf then began chasing poor Little Red. The clown and the wolf teamed up. The clown and the wolf were going to have a feast! They got closer and closer to her when suddenly… she tripped over a rock.
The clown and the wolf cached up to Little Red. The wolf bit her leg. She began to pour out blood. She was screaming and crying by this time and then she took her last breath before the clown viciously stabbed Little Red in her heart. He stabbed her multiple times before dragging her away.
By that time the sun began to rise and everyone had heard the news. They planned a funeral for little red. Little Red’s grandma was crying and placed the roses on little reds coffin. From that day The world wasn’t the same.

 

                                          THE END



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