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Disappear

April 5, 2016
By reneegall BRONZE, Newmarket, New Hampshire
reneegall BRONZE, Newmarket, New Hampshire
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I sat there at the train station with the wind blowing violently through my hair. It’s about 30 degrees outside. I’ve been watching all the people going by. Every person I see is different. They all have their own style and personality. As I look around I see the people who bang on the buckets and people who are just down here to hang out.

But there is this one guy who looks a bit sketchy to me. He’s tall, has brown hair, blue eyes and is wearing a big black coat that is covering half of his body. When he walked in he looked at me and then sat down at the bench across from me.
When my train finally arrived, I got up and and walked in the train and found a seat. The guy walked into the train and looked around to find a seat. As soon as he saw me he walked over to me and sat down. I felt really creeped out and uncomfortable.
He looked at me and said, “Hey I saw you sitting on the bench by yourself so I thought I’d sit with you on here”. I moved over a little to the right but he did too.
I answered him,” Well I was just waiting for the train”.
“OK but what is your name?”, he asked.
I didn’t know how to answer that so I just told him a fake name I came up with.
“My name is Judith West.”
He didn’t answer or even respond in anyway. He got up and walked down the train through the crowd of people and disappeared in thin air.
I go to the train station everyday for work and I see him every time now. But every time he is at the train station he gets on the train, finds someone to sit next to or talk to. He talks to them for a minute and then walks away and disappears in thin air.
The last time I went to the train station I saw him walking from the stairway entrance to the other end of the platform. He turned to me and then waved to me. I waved back and then he walked a few steps and then evaporated into the air. That was the last time I’ve ever seen him.


The author's comments:

I wrote this because I like creepy stories. 


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