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Prometeo
The ocean breeze dusted the years off the bricks and brought a salty sting to the
face of the coastal villa, melting the more prominent stone structures into smooth,
melancholic shapes. The defining borders between individual bricks dissolved, only
veteran residents could identify the dull grey roads from the awkward blue bridges, or
either from the red clay brick in the central plaza. This villa was revered as the most
beautiful in all of Andalucia, but not for the prevalence of the gorgeously hideous melted
stone roads and disfigured bridges. The reverence was born of a man whose inhumanity
baptized the Spanish people and adulterated the human race.
For as long as anyone could remember, he played guitar. Through every evening
of the mercilessly warm, humid summers-- when the notes nearly stuck in the sticky,
syrupy air-- the sound of his touch rang like a dinner bell for hungry children. The people
of the villa silently buzzed about the plaza --like Spain’s many winged insects buzz about
an orange flame-- which burned at the center every night, until midnight. Although
ineffable, for fear of some unforgivable sin, all who gathered to dine or shop in the
windows within his music were silent, as if there were a spell cast upon their vocal
chords, tying them gently in place with silken gossamer. It was said that even the
youngest child found no tears to cry in his plaza. Perhaps that is because their mothers
cried all the tears the two had between them, because for the people of the villa, nothing
was as beautiful as his music.
He was there most nights in the spring-- and autumn-- as well, touching his guitar
under the moonlight that washed over the plaster and brick. Floating in the soft light were
his blanket and guitar case, which was opened only once-- at midnight-- when he laid the
bright strings and worn wood to sleep. After a while they no longer mistook him for a
street performer, so most of the time he played in peaceful seclusion, dreaming at the
center of the villa. Those few individuals bold enough to insist (or god forbid leave their
money next to him) would elicit nearly the only stoppage in play, which purchased only
such an abrupt, embarrassing silence. The money was always taken up, crumpled by a
shaky hand, as the blushed-face drifted quickly away, luring the eyes of the merchants
and villa people. Only the coldest winter evenings kept him silent, and the nights in the
plaza without his emanating resonance were sparse as a war-torn, fatigued battlefield.
However, even this would not be enough to spawn the villa’s mysterious aura, for the
true inhumanity was the smell. The hero of the villa smelled so violently of sadness that
for ten meters around him the ground was permanently wet with tears, as if the very Earth
were crying and those tears crept up through the smooth brick, wiggling and negotiating a
space for them to rest, listening. One could find no explanation in his face (who had the
gall to interrupt him, or the emotional strength to be so close as to attempt?), and his body
was unyielding as the sun; he did not sway to his own music despite the swooning,
waving brick of the villa. Unmistakable as the shiver of a salty breeze on a full moon
night, was the dulcet fragrance of his misery. It reeked of despair, and flooded the air in
precious mescolanza. Of this--being only human-- they were murmurous. Something he
had lost now haunts him like a phantom. Or, his heart was a grey, dead organ that lay
decaying in his chest. The more vehement of them suggested him merely one of the many
homeless in the country, a slum child. This was reserved for the infrequent tourist, too
ungrateful to appreciate his fragrant sorrow.
On an especially busy evening after the harvest, where families silently bustled
and performed the rituals of the feast, a little boy learned of the origin of his pungent
smell. The boy’s mother lead him by hand into the heavy, salty air that hung over the
damp stone within two meters of his guitar case. The mother realized her son was trapped
by the evil man and she desperately tried to yank the boy along, praying out loud not to
be the one to disturb him, sweat seeping through skin. But the boy refused to move, and
in her struggle the woman dropped her bag of market goods and watched in breathlessly
as a lone orange rolled to his feet. The music stopped. The villa went silent as eyes
peered out from the shop stores and sidewalks. The villa rippled silently, like a pebble
ripples water. He bent and gently picked up the fruit, his fingers delicate as it disappeared
under the shadow of his hat. He gulped the scent.
“Porque eres tan triste?” blurted the child. His mother gasped, her eyes bulged.
She tugged on his hand in one more fit to pull him along and end the sinful encounter but
he commanded her compliance. The villa was waiting. His hand tossed the orange out to
the child who caught it deftly, and he patted the brick and clay next to his blanket. The
boy sat beside him, the stench of sadness was strong enough to cause blindness, but upon
striking the strings of his guitar the boy could no longer smell him. He played a beautiful
song, and the boy slowly nodded. He gave back the orange as he rose from his seat, and
took his mother’s hand and led her home. The swelling glow of the man’s music
cascaded back upon the plaza. This is the last time the people of the villa remember
anything sharp enough to interrupt his playing. The next time wouldn’t come for twelve
There was a stranger in the villa. His presence was undetected by the numb,
woebegone populace, and would’ve gone entirely absent to even the villa itself if he
hadn’t sauntered over the tear stained brick to the perch of the guitar player. The music
continued.
“You are a good guitar player.”
He made no reply, but offered the merest tip of his head with grace, his face
shielded by the brim of his hat from the stranger’s breath, heavy with spice and oranges.
“You must be the best in all of Andalusia. It doesn’t take a clever man to tell that
they must love you like a hero. Are you not a clever man?”
The music continued. Antagonized by the unusual heat of the May night, filled to
its capacity with the vibration of the strings, and by the wordless answers offered by the
“The music is fouled by your misery. Why play if it torments you?” At this, he
played on. The stranger’s voice was now but a murmur. His teeth were white. The brick
shifted nervously. “Surely you’d rather not--”
The music stopped. Aware of the upset in the quiet solemnity of the villa, la gente
quickly finished their business, money changed hands, glasses emptied, cigarettes were
butted out and sizzled on the damp stone brick, and they scurried away like mice to their
holes. Soon the plaza was empty in sound and body, save the obvious.
“Why do you inquire so?” His English was uncomfortable, the stranger took no
“Call it curiosity. One angel of suffering to another.” He flashed a toothy grin, it
glinted in the moonlight. The salty breeze from the coast blew between the two angels,
and the brick shivered.
“What may I play for you?”
“Save me your scripted words, hero. Tell me this: why is it you are here every
“A tocarse de algo bonita--”
“I don’t want your script, soul. You know why these bricks are wet?” The
stranger gestured, and his gazed followed to the dark, damp red brick under the stranger’s
feet. “You give freely of things not of Earth, things it shouldn’t understand. You know
that we can’t allow this any longer. I’m here for you, and you must leave with me. These
people, of the villa, cannot have you any longer.” A moment passed. “However, your
gorgeous thing has touched me too, so I offer a proposition.” The stranger reached out his
arm, palm up, and took his hand. The callouses in the left palm, the leather and velvet
stretched tight around the slender bone of fingers that drew the sound from the strings.
“I propose we make a deal, hero. I will make you whole again. Give you the
beating heart beautiful enough to cleanse you of your sadness. I will make your guitar
into a beautiful woman, who will love you as it loves you, without fault. She will be your
missing love incarnate. But it will not be free.” The stranger squeezed his left arm, just
above the wrist. The hero of the villa swallowed hard.
“I--”
“If you break this covenant, if you decide you cannot live having traded your
hand for your heart, your villa will end. I will be forced to burn it down, smoke and flame
will destroy anything you’ve left in the brick and the people. The only sound will be the
crack of fire and the susurrous fall of ash.”
His head was now up, bathing in the light of a tired, early morning moon. The
Villa held its breath. He sighed in the air that smelled of oranges.
The story of how love was brought to Spain is often told in passing nostalgia as
something long forgotten. As the decrepit old die away, meagerly dripping words from
their mouths like bile, they make room for an ignorant youth. Every time an old one feels
the cold fingered grip of death, the tradition of telling the story begins. Despite the
offense many generations of storytelling has paid to the tale, the same final image spills
off the elder’s lips: a black silhouette upon agonized brick, floating in a sea of orange
hellfire.

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Magical realism is such a fascinating idea. The most impactful personal experiences I have had take the form of these kinds of mystical narratives in my head, so I suppose it's only right that my writing reflects that.