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That House...

September 3, 2014
By Music_is_Better_then_People SILVER, East Bend, North Carolina
Music_is_Better_then_People SILVER, East Bend, North Carolina
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Only God can judge me.


There they were. Just hanging around the mall going in all their favorite stores. They you may ask are Ryder, Aiden, Wynter, Ophelia and Kierra. Everyone is seventeen except Ryder and Wynter. They are twins at the age of sixteen almost seventeen. Their birthday is in three days. Aiden, Ophelia and Kierra wanted to take them both shopping for their birthday, so that is why they are at the mall.

As they were leaving Hot Topic Wynter asked if they could go to the food court because she was getting hungry. Everyone agreed because they were hungry too. When they got their food they ran into another group of people that they had seen around town. This group was known for getting into trouble at times, and their names were Kyle, Daren, Eric, Lyric and Nevara. Wynter, her brother and their friends decided to ignore them and just go eat their food.

The other group wasn’t having that thought. They followed the others to where they were going to sit and sat with them. They started to talk to Wynter, her brother and their friends and soon realised that they were annoying and wanted them to go away. Just so they could stay and talk they suggested to go do something fun.

Aiden and his group new right away that is was a bad idea. They wanted to do something fun though, so they decided to go along with it. Although, both groups didn’t know what was up ahead for them in their future.

They decided to go play Seven Minutes in Heaven. The catch though, was they went and played it in this haunted house deep in the woods. The reason it is said to be haunted is because supposedly this family was brutally murdered in the house one late night. Even though Kyle’s group were the ones to suggest they go there. Everyone was at least a little bit scared.

To start off the game they let Wynter go first since its her birthday soon, and the fact she is a girl. She spun the bottle and it landed on Kyle. They both went into another room and when they first stepped into the room they immediately got a cold chill. It was a little awkward at first, but then they continued on with the game.

Five and a half minutes into it they suddenly heard an ear piercing scream, and ran back to the main room. There they found Ophelia and Eric. Both had been beheaded and had multiple long, deep cuts on their bodies.

Wynter right away asks what had happened, and Lyric responds that everyone that was waiting on her and Kyle had went to look around. Ophelia and Eric decided to just stay there since neither of them were interested. Then when they all came back they seen both of them laying on the floor dead.

Well why Lyric was explaining this nobody noticed the figure walking up behind Aiden until it was too late. The killer had swung its weapon at Aiden’s neck; cutting his head clean off. He then moved on to Nevara who was standing right next to Aiden. She moved away right as the killer swung, but that didn’t stop her from getting hit from behind. There was a second killer and they stabbed her right through the chest.

While all this was happening Wynter and Ryder couldn’t help but recognise the two killers. They were the previous owners of the home who had died a long time ago and nobody really cared. Since nobody cared they became evil spirit people who murdered everyone that ever set foot in that house. Their names were Sarah and Jacob Ohanson.

After killing Nevara they went away. Everyone who was left, which was Ryder, Wynter, Kierra, Kyle, Daren and Lyric, all tried to run to the door to leave. Although, the door wouldn’t budge. Noor would the windows or back door. Everyone was freaking out because they couldn’t leave.

While they were freaking out they didn’t notice how the Ohanson ghosts were plotting their next move. They also didn’t notice how they were starting to follow through with their plan. One by one they started to take everyone out. Starting with Daren. Then it was Kierra. Lyric was the next victim. Kyle was the last one that the Ohansons killed that night.

The reason they didn’t kill the twins was because they knew of the Ohansons. Back when it was mentioned that nobody cared about the Ohanson’s death. That was a lie. Both the twins had went to the funeral. The had cared about the Ohanson’s death, so they let the twins go.

With that though, Ryder and Wynter were to tell everyone to never go to that house. They were to never forget that night. Wynter and Ryder were to grow old and tell their children and grandchildren about their experience and to always be afraid of that house.


The author's comments:

I wrote this because we had to write a fiction story and I just love creepy, scary and horror related stuff.

 
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