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The Story of Louis

June 2, 2014
By Nightwing16 BRONZE, New York, New York
Nightwing16 BRONZE, New York, New York
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There is a 18 year old boy. his name is Louis. Louis had a good life. Louis had a job at pizza shop as a chef. Louis was the one that made all the pizza at the place. His mom Monica had a job as a manager at a five star restaurant. His dad Marshall in a school as a janitor. Louis lived in a big house. This house had 2 bedrooms, a huge living room, 2 floors, 3 bathrooms, and Louis lived here with his parents. Louis also had a girlfriend named Melany. Melany was a beautiful girl who had blonde hair, blue eyed and a slim body. Melany worked as a waitress in the same restaurant as Louis’ mom.

A few months go by and everything is fine. No one is having any problems in life. It is now June and Louis’ birthday is in a few days. His mom is planning to buy him a nice car for his 19th birthday. His dad was going to help pay the car. His girlfriend was going to buy him some stuff for his new car. So the day before his birthday his mom has the car and she is hiding the car in the garage. Louis’ birthday comes and they are getting the car ready to give to Louis. They say happy birthday to him and he goes to a nice restaurant with his girlfriend to finish celebrating his day. So the next day comes and Louis wakes up and gets ready for work. He was working a long shift so he got out of work at 11:00pm. When he got home there is cop cars all over outside of his house. He jumps out his cars and screams “What in the world in going.” The police officers struggle to hold him back. Louis glimpses from the corner of his eye and he sees coroners carrying out two body bags. The police officers who he is and Louis says that he is the son of the people in that house. The officer says we are sorry for your loss.

Louis then falls down and starts to break down in tears. Eventually he gets up and calls Melany. He explains to her what happened and she told him to meet her at her house. So Louis drove where Melany comforted him. A few days go by and Louis is still mourning. He was staying Melanie's house because he was too traumatized. They performed an autopsy on both Monica and Marshall, they found out that Marshall was the one that killed Monica and then killed himself. He first shot Monica then shot himself in the head. They also then found out that Marshall was under the influence of meth. They said that while he was under the influence that something in his head made him very angry towards Monica. Louis was very shocked by what happened. Louis had a plan.


Louis’ plan was to go around the world to different schools explaining his story and why drugs are so bad for you and what happens when people are under the influence of drugs. Melany thought that he was crazy and she did not want to leave her job and family so they separated, Louis did not pay it no mind. He was determined to get that message out there. Louis went everywhere from New York to California to London to Russia. One thing that helped Louis that he enjoyed was all the different cool things he got to see. For example seeing the Trade Center Memorial in New York was something he really enjoyed. He also got to see plenty of other things. Eventually Louis stopped telling his story because he was finally at peace and decided that a lot of people heard his story and decided not to do drugs.

The reason people should stop doing drugs is because there are so many deaths and devastating accidents that are caused by people who are under the influence of drugs. When people are under the influence of drugs they can do crazy things that they won’t even know did. A lot of kids or teens suffer with their parents that do drugs. For example parents will take the money that they are supposed to use the money for food and buy drugs and the kid or teen can suffer from this. The teen or kid can also be stressed out from seeing their parents under the influence. So if you are planning on doing drugs please think about the people around you first.



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