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Shine

February 23, 2010
By amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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Up on the stage in front of a thousand others, I stand with bright lights shining down on me. Everyone’s eyes are fixed on me. Now it is time for me to shine. I keep telling myself I can do this. I start to sing. At the end, everyone applaused. I feel like a star.


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on Jan. 24 2012 at 10:10 am
falling-rain GOLD, Layton, Utah
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Getr done!
larry the cable guy

seriously awesome.. i dont sin i play the guitar but i get it:) great job keep writing!:D

on May. 11 2010 at 7:20 am
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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Thank you so much! I will look at more of your stuff too. Thanks again! :-)

on May. 9 2010 at 10:04 am
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

i really like this, you are an excellent writer! :)

on Apr. 7 2010 at 7:52 am
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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I love the stage too! And thank you for the support! Thanks! 

on Apr. 6 2010 at 4:08 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Now I do love this one! This is how I felt my first time singing a solo.. sigh- I love the stage! I like how you used shine and star together without over-doing it