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Can You Help Her?! ... Anybody??

December 21, 2009
By RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship


Black clouds creep up over her cold, frostbitten heart. It seems everything she touches turns that dark shade of grey.
She can't remeber the last time she smiled. Maybe never.
She welcomes the feeling of pain, because it's better than feeling nothing at all.
Her eyes are painted black, her cheeks are tear-stained.
The cuts only help for that second. For that one second she feels all the pain ooze down her arm in the form of the sticky, red blood.
But when it's gone, she has nothing. Nothing but her tears. nothing but the pain.
But the pain is better than nothing.
When the pain subsides, her mind fills with all the nothingness that her life has become. An empty balck hole, seeming to never end.
She wants so badly to get out of this vast gulf of black that entraps her heart. She longs for something more in this life. She searches but she doesn't find. All she gets is more pain and hurt.
She asks herself every day if there is more to liffe than this, but she comes up empty handed.
Blood-curdling screams fill her ears and she realizes that it's coming from her.
She screams for someone.
Anyone
"HELP!" it's all she can sya. All she can think.
She wants it and desperately needs it.
She yearns for a way out, an escape from all the pain that she feels.



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on Sep. 2 2011 at 1:40 pm
far.from.you. GOLD, Bradenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
" She completly fell for him, but he didnt even stumble...</3" -unknown.

This is so amazing! i seriously l o v e i t_(: goodjob.

on Nov. 17 2010 at 12:26 am
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
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Live for today, not for tomorrow

I can relate to this! You are strong and determined Jess. Keep fighting and when you fall, I'll catch you... I'm crying now. Somehow all your work makes me cry because it's so beautiful...  

on Sep. 12 2010 at 3:12 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Shmank you

paperflowers said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 1:52 pm
paperflowers, Imaginary, Indiana
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Wow

That was really amazing


on Jul. 30 2010 at 12:34 pm
BrittneyCloud SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Dont tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon!"

wow. that was deep:) i really liked it!

on Jul. 25 2010 at 1:04 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Lol, thanks.

on Jul. 24 2010 at 4:20 pm
GilmoreGirl SILVER, Cottage Grove, Minnesota
7 articles 17 photos 3 comments

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All those who believe in telekinesis raise my hand.

Amazing, amazingly dark. Wow.

 

P.S. I like your new name,  OffMyRocker.


on Jul. 17 2010 at 6:37 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Yeah, dark is good.

on Jun. 21 2010 at 1:18 pm
Serendipity_Pen GOLD, Shakopee, Minnesota
12 articles 28 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only way of finding the limits of the possible is by going beyond them into the impossible."
~ Arthur C. Clarke
"Better to remain silent and thought a fool then to speak and remove all doubt." ~Abraham Lincoln

I agree. But just because its dark, doesn't mean that it isn't amazing. Well done!

on May. 22 2010 at 1:47 pm
Not_so_wicked_witch BRONZE, Midland, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Last night I lay in bed looking up at the stars in the sky and I thought to myself, Where the HECK is my ceiling?!






-Don't know who wrote this...

That's pretty good! Dark, but good!

on Feb. 10 2010 at 5:17 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Sank you, I hope you're doing well.:)

Talia12 GOLD said...
on Feb. 10 2010 at 10:38 am
Talia12 GOLD, Zephyrhills?, Florida
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isaiah 12:2

wow...this is so disturbingly beautiful lol...i love it


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