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Opulence MAG

May 1, 2008
By AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There&#039;s just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger<br /> <br /> Life it too short to let you matter.


I’ve been watching him for days now. When he leaves his house to go to school, I’m the one carefully tailing him, switching cars every day to make myself look less suspicious. If he ever sneaks out of his second-story room, I’ll be the one silently watching from a nearby tree. In class when he turns, feeling eyes on the back of his head, I’m the one who sent the hair on the back of his neck up on end. I am the girl whose shadow is always slightly overlapping his.

Being assigned to watch him almost makes me
feel like I’m not a stalker. Though I’m only 17, I’m a full-fledged member of the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. I’ve been with them since the ­tender age of five. It’s my home. Being an orphan, my office is also my permanent residence, the couch a fold-out bed. There are many others like me: no family. A lot of us are loners and haven’t chosen this route for ourselves.

I’m a tracker. I have been for years and some might say that I am the best at not being the best. In other words, I’m great at being invisible. Or at not being noticed. It’s not as hard as the others in the organization think. Being young and female is good, since most we track are young. Seeing me around younger people – my age, actually – doesn’t raise alarm bells. It helps that I’m cute. With a small frame, light hazel eyes, and short blond hair that curls under my chin, I don’t appear threatening. Of course, my ­organization-funded training doesn’t back that theory.

Soon I won’t be tracking down others with the power. They are finally going to give me an apprentice. After years of mastering everything I’ve been taught, they see my potential. That’s not to say I know everything. Even with my extended life I won’t be able to learn all the things I want to. If only this annoying boy would show the signs. It’s been almost a week. If he doesn’t show soon, they’ll reassign me. That much longer until I get my apprentice.

So here I am, sipping a latté and waiting for the Target to leave for school. I have been put in all of his classes in case something happens there, though I graduated high school years ago. Private tutors sped things up. With no family or personal ties, I had lots of time to devote to my studies. Martial arts black belts. Twelve languages, not including English. Everything a girl needs for a serious career in the agency. Such positions of power are not handed out easily. You must prove yourself many times over.

The Target and I have never spoken, but I know a lot about him. His file told me some, but after watching him for only a few days, I feel confident in saying that I know things no one else does. Not just the obvious, either. He resents his father and is protective of his mother, which makes me suspect the father is less than faithful. He smiles often but doesn’t make a lot of eye contact. He usually only speaks when spoken to. Although he has many friends, he isn’t close with any of them. The Target is observant, a watcher. This leads me to believe we would get along if he shows any promise.

I look down at my watch, then back at his house a few blocks away. The Target is late, which means I’ll be late too. Today my ride is a shiny black sports car, not out of place in this suburb full of midlife-crisis men. I turn on the engine impatiently. I’m fiddling with the radio when I hear something. I don’t feel any immediate danger, and I know to trust those feelings. But I ­also know that something is off.

Just as I am about to get out of the car and pretend to look in the trunk, the passenger door opens. I look up in surprise as the Target slides into the seat next to me. I grin, quite pleased by this turn of events. This is definitely a good sign. Perhaps intuition is strong in him. That would be good for my apprentice to have, complementary. I could handle having to deal with that.

“Hello, Lenna. Why have you been following me for a week now?” the Target asks lightly, conversationally, his first words ever said in my direction.

Ah, one of my many aliases. The organization set it up so that whenever I’m on a case, I get a new name, past, and present. It’s very powerful. The organization can basically do anything it needs; it has people everywhere imaginable. I’m just one of many, though there aren’t that many at the top, as I am. They don’t trust many to be trackers. Or to be apprentices. All of the full members have the power, though we control others to get things done.

My smile deepens as I say in my authoritative, professional voice, “My real name is Jade. I am a witch of the moon and a tracker for the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. You are also a witch. We would like to formally welcome you into the organization as my apprentice. Here is my card for verification.”

Jade Wordsworth
Tracker for O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E
Official Political Understanding Lending ­Everyone ­Navigation for Co-Existing Ethereals
Office hours: 8 a.m.-3 p.m. Mon-Sat
Phone: 555-5555
Proud league of witches of the sun and moon.
Worldwide.

“What do you mean ‘moon and sun’? Or ‘tracker’?” he asks, still looking at my card like it’s going to ­disappear.

“Types of magic. Moon is all about spells, the sun is more potion-based, though each type of witchcraft involves the other somehow. As a tracker, I find people like you and I bring them to O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. Every witch must register, train, and become a member by law. In fact, the organization is like a government targeted toward witches,” I explain with a smile, loving the fact that this time I get to teach the newbie.

“Magic? Seriously?” he asks, eyes wide, meeting mine. They are large, yellow, and catlike.

I click a button on my left, automatically locking the doors. I put the car into drive, pulling out onto the road. As an afterthought I add as a courtesy, “I think you had better come with me.” .



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on Feb. 12 2010 at 8:40 pm
Robkingett PLATINUM, Tallahassee, Florida
24 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was little they called me a liar, but now I&#039;m grown up, they call me a writer.

i hated it................ NOT!

on Feb. 12 2010 at 5:41 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 296 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do what you want. If it&#039;s something you&#039;ll regret in the morning, sleep late.&quot;

It really did draw me in, but the ending was a little bit abrupt and the witchcraft thing surprised me and could have been explained a little bit more thoroughly. Other than that, it was really really good. I liked it :)

amber96_ said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 3:17 pm
amber96_, Anglesey, Other
0 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;no&quot;

it certainly drew me in :) it was exciting. but you lost me at the witch and the moon part at the end. and the orphan thing is a little old. i thought it was really clever though. you must have really thought about "O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E" and what it stands for, etc. cool stuff ;)

on Feb. 10 2010 at 6:59 pm
evrycloudyday7 PLATINUM, Wappingers Falls, New York
28 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what counts.&quot; Seneca<br /> &quot;I&#039;ll just read a book instead. I don&#039;t care if we&#039;re just friends. I can hang out with myself I&#039;m old enough now to pretend. Bam ba dum ba dum ba dum.&quot; kate n

wow really nice writing style! the story drew me in

on Feb. 9 2010 at 7:05 am
Great writing, but maybe a different background? The orphan sob-story i sgetting a little old.

on Feb. 8 2010 at 1:26 am
Angel_writer1481 SILVER, Springdale, Maryland
8 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t take life too seriously, no one gets out of it alive.

I thought it was a good story but you lost me when you got to the witchcraft part. I love witchcraft stories as much as the next person, it's just the witchcraft didn't seem to flow with the story.

on Feb. 7 2010 at 7:08 pm
I enjoyed this, I thought it was well written and had a good story-line. I would read more, Keep Writting!

on Feb. 6 2010 at 9:38 pm
slightlymad BRONZE, Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania
1 article 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I can&#039;t dislike you, but I will say this to you: you haven&#039;t got long before you are all going to kill yourselves, because you are all crazy. And you can project it back at me ... but I am only what lives inside each and every one of you.&rdquo;

All the stuff with spying/witchcraft is a little old (being in an organization that replaces family)

on Feb. 6 2010 at 6:29 pm
Audrea15 PLATINUM, Murphysboro, Illinois
25 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everybody wants happiness. Nobody wants pain. But you cant have a rainbow. Without a little rain.

This is awesome keep writing and please please check out my new stuff!!!

Laura said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 7:05 pm
clever stoty

on Feb. 5 2010 at 5:49 pm
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
22 articles 5 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

i love the plot! makes me want to read more. you should finish it!

on Feb. 4 2010 at 9:52 pm
though your descriptions of the action weren't that bad, the narrator was kind of confusing and flat. i also think that you used a bit too much description. it wasn't that bad, it just wasn't that good either.

luckyducky said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:11 pm
i loved it, it really caught my eye,i love stories withwitchcraft and yours is just amazing!!

on Feb. 1 2010 at 3:59 pm
LuLu95 PLATINUM, Denver, Colorado
32 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Oooh! Dark matter, we better bring a flashlight!&quot;

i had the same feeling

aspen tree said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 1:16 pm
this was pretty good untill you got to the witchcraft stuff. i think that it would be beter if it was like spy stuff.

on Feb. 1 2010 at 1:14 pm
This was really good. The introduction really caught me. I love how the girl is misterious. Something about her makes me want to read this story more.

Kool Korie said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 1:10 pm
Whoa! i really like this bookit is cool and i think it might be my favorite... ;1

Quinn said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 12:02 pm
it was really confusing and i would love ro read it agaain...8)

Moonhowler said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:29 am
This tale caught my attention immediately. Please make more chapters!

on Jan. 31 2010 at 7:00 pm
LuLu95 PLATINUM, Denver, Colorado
32 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Oooh! Dark matter, we better bring a flashlight!&quot;

I'm not sure if im loving the magic part, but overall i thought it had a really cool tone to it, and it makes you want to know what comes next, i hope there will be another installment